Reviews for A Bee Among Strawberries
sarista wow chapter 17 . 11/18/2017
An intense chapter, Sui-Feng felt a bit damseled in part, but she did get to do some cool stuff and great idea with Tatsuki's power! This has been an amazing and powerful story, kudos!
sarista wow chapter 16 . 11/18/2017
A very impressive chapter, Sui-Feng going brutal was cool to see and well described, its been weird how isolated from events she's been I get why but it can be vexing when someone can fix everything but is instead stuck in the background XD
sarista wow chapter 15 . 11/18/2017
Really nice interactions, I love all the mystery and lack of full understanding, its so frustrating in a good way and raises the tension and oh snap that ending! Also nice to see Tatsuki and Rukia dealing with each other better.
sarista wow chapter 14 . 11/18/2017
Really intense confrontation this chapter, kudos, also nice Tatsuki and Sui-Feng stuff!
sarista wow chapter 13 . 11/18/2017
Fascinating and terrifying, rather amazed Sui-Feng didn't sense anything, nor anyone else, but the confrontation was horrifying and epic and terrifying, and that ending fills me with dread.
sarista wow chapter 12 . 11/18/2017
I am really weirded out by how horrible Yoruichi is being, though there was some catharsis in Sui-Feng standing up to her. Calling Chad a lummox seems unfair given his intelligence, but interesting stuff.
sarista wow chapter 11 . 11/18/2017
A very interesting chapter, loved the secret meeting that was really neat and ah still so many secrets XD
sarista wow chapter 10 . 11/18/2017
A lot of this chapter left me very uncomfortable because it seemed to ascribe a lot of extra callousness or borderline ego & malice to Rukia's action, plus Sui-Fen being interested in guys just weirds me out XD The ending did make it a lot more comfortable though and the politics and culture and mistaken assumptions were very interesting and well delivered.
sarista wow chapter 9 . 11/18/2017
A very interesting chapter, a shame to see those other characters die, also Rukia is being weirdly calm about a human who can see and kill Hollows.
sarista wow chapter 8 . 11/18/2017
Wow, you manage to add so much detail, perspective and intricacy into what would in many eyes be a super small scene, kudos on that front, love the depth Chizuru got when she worried about Orihime.
sarista wow chapter 7 . 11/18/2017
A fascinating tale, though wait, Masaki and Sun-Feng were rivals? I thought Isshin and Sun-Feng were rivals!? Very interesting stuff regardless, excellently detailed and described.
sarista wow chapter 6 . 11/18/2017
Dang, Sui-Feng is kind of a mess, though she has healed to varying degrees which is nice, Tatsuki and Orihime stuff is wonderful, kudos and Hana is offering some interesting stuff, loved the photo album sleuthing!
sarista wow chapter 5 . 11/18/2017
Really interesting stuff, dang I feel bad for Sui-Feng! :( Really cool interactions with Isshin as well!
sarista wow chapter 4 . 11/18/2017
Very interesting stuff, great awkward interactions and I love Tatsuki deducing stuff!
sarista wow chapter 3 . 11/18/2017
Some very interesting stuff! I felt so bad for Sui-Feng with how roughly Yoruichi is treating her :(
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