Tis a cute lil' story. I love it!

Despite you thinking you didn't do your idea justice it was an enjoyable read. I loved watching the Twilight Zone as a child and I know which episode you're talking about.

Thank you for posting.

Aww. I guess this was one way to prove to Sephiroth that Cloud really cared about what happened to him.

Nice story, like all I have read of you till now.

I loved that episode! It reminded me of that, and then you said you based it off of it. Go Cloud! Give 'em what they need :D

I like this one :)

Great story. Good work.

I really enjoyed this story. Well written and fun. Well not fun for Sephiroth since he got almost dead but still fun. Keep on writing.

aww, i liked this one shot now sephirot got to protect cloud from hojo

Creative. I love your stories in general but I think this is possibly my favorite one. Seperately, I've seen all the ideas but I really, -really- liked how you smoothed them into one.

Yay for the Twilight Zone! Thanks for writing. :)

Le Gasp! It is such a good one-shot!

Ya know, FF7 is kinda mindfu** like the Twilight Zone... *Starts thinking... While humming the theme... You have now entered... The Twilight Zone*

Cloud, Zack, and Seph on the ride... Now THAT's a one-shot to think about...

Just saying...

The Ninja Vendetta

Here you go, I think you'll be a better caretaker for him. *pats review on the head affectionately* See you later! XD

sina cere

PandaFlower

Pfffft. I wants to pick you up, throw you off a roof, and then catch you at the bottom and hug you.

In a totally more sane way than that sounds.

Cloud was so sweet; I loved his hick/gansta sorta accent (I'm a dork, I imagined him with a gangster accent) and Sephiroth's quiet confusion at being kissed akldskfldfkh it was GORGEOUS. :O How come you haven't been discovered by one of those famous authors yet?

Well, it may not have come out how you wanted it to, but it was enjoyable to read nontheless. I like alot of your stories for the fact that they are different. I usually prefer au fic for the fact it gives the author more wiggle room when dealing with the canon characters. Meaning that since events or histories are changed their personality can have differences since different circumstances breed different people. Not to mention not many canon stories get the the full depth of the characters. CLoud can only be a wimp or invincible. He can just have different parts to his perosnlaity. Sorry rantin here. The fact I just like your stories and hope you continue creating more.

Wow I love this story, the idea is great and I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.