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Guest chapter 46 . 1/31/2018 3 3 3 |
MaryNiki chapter 46 . 4/6/2017 That part where Thor is talking about the bet in chapter 45, starting with: The Asgard people, Dr. Jackson, Tealc... was most funny thing Ive read in a while. I totally heard the voices of Thor and ONeill saying it in my head. Poor Jack, that must have been embarasing for him. Good work with that scene :) I really liked when they were prisoners on Heptae ship and Jack healed Sam by pure instinct when holding her. I liked that you incorporated events from episode Frozen. I liked that episode a lot. I loved that Jack wanted so badly set everything right before he thought he was going to die. He was only one who had a power over Heptae and knew when he didnt make them agree to leave, no one will. It shows nicely his great sence of responsibility for the country and world. You almost broke my heart when I thought Sam and Jack were back to square one. You cant do that :) But Im glad, everything worked out just fine. Thank you for another great story. I enjoyed reading very much. |
MaryNiki chapter 23 . 3/24/2017 Hi, I just want to tell you how much I love your stories and your writing. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent with us all. Ive read several of your fanfiction and love them all. So this review will be more about your works in general rather than this story. I love the way you weave your stories, the settings, the plot, the circumstances or aliens are always intriguing, original and well thought out. The stories are very interesting and I cant wait to see what youve prepared next. Ive always loved stories with good plots and adventure and yours definitely has it. All your characters are so believable and close to those in the series, even if their motives and backgrounds changes from story to story, that I never had a problem believe the characters from Stargate could behave the way you show them. In fact on a couple of occassions I wasnt quite sure if this or that bit was your idea or if it was a part of TV series (I still havent seen all 10 seasons), The characters are also well developed and not just those main, but secondary and tertiary ones too. I also like that in your stories is humour, suspense and you managed capturing the interaction between all characters very well. You managed to surprise me many times too, and that is not easy. If the show would have ever decided to go shippy, they could have easily use your stories :) And then there is ship. I love Sam and Jack and you do them and their relationship a justice. I think my most favorite story of yours in Another Lost on a Planet Fic, because not just it was an interesting tale, but Sam and Jack spent so much time together and interacting with each other (and aware who they were :) ). Sorry I let myself carried away, but I really enjoyed your stories very much and Im very grateful you decided to share your talent and wrote so many long and great Sam and Jack stories. |
Smiffy11052 chapter 46 . 2/19/2016 I enjoyed this story first time round. It seemed to get better 2nd time round. Thankyou |
FanFicForever chapter 46 . 7/1/2015 I realize this is wildly, WILDLY late, but I just found this and read through it. I love it - through and through! Good action, good pacing, good stress points. I was seriously hating on Andrew early in the story! Good and proper endings all around. |
Tamolino chapter 46 . 4/25/2015 OMG... why do I always have to cry when a story is finished :/ Ugh... please write something new and long after Surebu :D |
Tamolino chapter 25 . 4/24/2015 OOOOOOOOOOOOH... |
Tamolino chapter 23 . 4/23/2015 Oh, I really loved this chapter :) |
Tamolino chapter 18 . 4/23/2015 OMG, I hate Andrew. What an ass... And him volunteering, I bet he just wants to look good for Sm. And right now, Sam is not my favorite either :/ |
Tamolino chapter 2 . 4/20/2015 Another story that I havent read yeat. Can you sa T... I am loving it so far :) |
weezer42 chapter 46 . 4/19/2015 thank you for another fabulous story with our favourite hero's and heroine's. I've been enjoying several of your wonderfully looooooong stories, and have to say you are a truly inventive and creative writer. Each one has had an original slant, and creative plot, along with great characterizations and emotional punch. Thank you for sharing, I look forward to reading more...they are all a pleasure and definite keepers |
aRandomPeople chapter 1 . 4/18/2015 Heh. I know I'm a bit late but I just had to review. This story was a wonderful read, action, drama...you name it. I loved the character interactions and the oc's were down to earth and very human. They played important roles, but didn't feel like main characters. The plot was complicated and connected but not confusing and the writing was smooth. The character's interactions (expecially the team's) were natural and though I'm not a big romance fan, the shipping (j/s) was a gradual (sort of) progress throughout the story and didn't rule the entire story, making it quite enjoyable for my tastes. AMAZING! I love this work of art! |
Bloody dawn chapter 46 . 2/10/2014 I really loved this story ! Thank you ! |
Smiffy 134 chapter 46 . 6/28/2013 Crying again. Great story telling don't know how you do it. |
Smiffy 134 chapter 9 . 6/27/2013 Oh another good story again wish I could read quicker |