I love this story so far and would love to read some more!

Please update soon!

I nearly cried at this chapter :'(

Cheesiness is a part of life. I prefer not to review if it makes you happy because this chapter made me want to cry! JK. I watched the anime and the same thing happened. Sorta. Kinda. Not really. Anyway...Thank you for writing! Again...I missed the fact that there were two chapters so...whatever. Update soon!

It's not confusing...not much...JK it really isn't. It's too short to be confusing. Try adding POV's. That will make it easier to understand. Or you could describe one person at a time. Thank you for writing! Trust me, I have read worse so don't sweat it. Update as soon as you can!

Both chapters are pretty good