Reviews for Broken |
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Guest chapter 27 . 6/18 good, but you dont cast reparo you cast episkey |
HermioneGranger chapter 25 . 6/1/2019 NOOO! DON"T STOP POSTING! PLZ I LOVE READING THIS |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/24/2018 This hit me close to home. Damn. |
ToQuinnWithLove chapter 31 . 8/22/2016 Wonderful job, I loved this story all the way through. A very real and detailed account of going through an ED. I'll be reading the sequel next :) thank you. |
ecoenarciso chapter 31 . 8/1/2016 I loved this story! Thank you for having written it! Now I'm gonna reading the sequel :) |
Love Of Blood chapter 20 . 1/15/2015 I promise to read more, later |
Brian1972 chapter 30 . 11/6/2014 Intense and very good. Personally I think that sometimes it is written as if they are all still minors. As an adult Hermione should have greater possibilities to avoid certain confrontations. I.e. all she had to do to avoid Madame Pomp. to send her to a mindhealer or to admitt her is to leave Hogwarts. Second minor critique is how Hermioneinteracts with her friends sometimes. Most prominent the interaction direct after the summer, since she really felt abadonned and betrayed (all on Ron's side) she should have let it show more (i.e. use this circumstance as excuse not to eat with them). Last little critique is her instant drop in grades. While I agree that such conditions will likley lead to such problems it should be more gradualy. But those a minor remarks. Overall the story is really good! |
hermionefan1983 chapter 21 . 10/11/2014 I HAVE PSYCHOLOGISTS WITH THE CONDESCENDING WAY THEY TALK! ERRRRRRRRRR ! |
hermionefan1983 chapter 21 . 10/11/2014 i thought her worse fear is getting FAT? |
hermionefan1983 chapter 21 . 10/11/2014 but hermione isnt 91 pounds because she faked that number with the spells pansy gave her! |
hermionefan1983 chapter 20 . 10/11/2014 so hermione's animagi is a dolphin? COOL! althought i would have thought it to be a lioness? |
hermionefan1983 chapter 16 . 10/11/2014 she cant throw up anymore or cut herself anymore because of ron etc being with her ALL THE TIME! did the midwitch warn them about the cutting too? |
snapefan1983 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014 its not anorexia its BULIMIA! ron and harry hermione need to get THAT right! |
hermionefan1983 chapter 4 . 10/10/2014 is snape in this story? |
hermionefan1983 chapter 2 . 10/10/2014 which one really happened what Ron said or what hermione said happened? |