Next chapter please continue story please

Oh my God this is a smoothie of nonsense, awful grammar and just bad ideas. PLEASE man at least just get a beta to fucking correct the train wreck you're calling grammar.

Why did Naruto leave those men alive? Allowing them to live to return to Gato and tell him what happened is something only an idiot would do, something you have established Naruto is not.

could you in your next story or any other Story please not start off using a bunch of the same lines from your previous stories please and thank-you it kind of gets annoying

More, more, more! Damn it-I NEED MORE!

Finish this story

Yup a mess of a story. I really do NOT like it. FYI got this right Yin-Yang meaning Dark-Light. Yin is dark and yang is light. There is no g in yin.

Either you’re not a native English speaker or you belong in special education. This story is painful to read. “The suddenly Naruto’s eyes suddenly changed, inside his eye is an outline of what seems like fire, his eyes also look more cold and seriously. He quickly without thinking carried Akane in a bridal style carry and Hyper Speed into the battle.”

Typos, using the same word twice in one sentence, missing punctuation, pointlessly adding -ly, pointlessly capitalising -hyper speed, missing crucial words in the sentence structure and the list goes on. Not to mention you just spent five chapters talking up his abilities and how much he’d trained, yet he still has to rely on some random power that he somehow hadn’t found out about until this very moment.. okay.

... you aren’t actually pulling this, are you? Just went through a whole chapter of Minato and Kushina being horrible, neglectful parents and Narumi being particularly vindictive and cruel to Naruto. Then in this chapter we learn Minato knowingly lets adults beat up his prepubescent son, yet you want me to believe he cares about him? Kushina hadn’t shown any semblance of care for him, yet now you want us to ignore that and take your word for it that she does, she just hasn’t shown it. Narumi rubbed it in his face that he is nothing to their family, but you want us to accept that she loves him, no just as a brother but as a boy? Come off it.

A bust ranging from C-cups to D-cups?

What does that mean? Each breast is a different size? They change with the weather? I’m confused.

Cliché much?

well i really am disappointed at how weak he is , you said he is gonna be really strong even close to god like , this is just a little strong , Zabuza is an A ranked ninja so naruto is even weaker than that .other than that i have to say this was an incredible read , really liked it . its a shame you no longer update this .

this was great but i think kushina is as guilty as minato , well other than the beatings . she cant just start acting like a mother now , i really hope he wont forgive them but seeing them in the harem means he will , this sucks . i hope to read a neglect fic where naruto doesn't forgive his parents .anyway this was good but i wanna see an OP naruto soon .

i have to say i am really liking this story so far so much . its real shame you are no longer updating it . even tho its been 8 years i still hope you come back . this is just too good to leave it like this .the only complain is the harem , i HATE big harem , i really do but i like neglect story and this one is damn great , i just hope he wont forgive them soon . also where is our really strong naruto , hope to see him soon .

this was a great chapter , even tho there were many things not true but if we look at the time this was released it would be before any of that stuff got revealed in the manga so its cool . liked it .