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Very real. I could see all of this happening. Jack always did show more feeling for Gwen. It did always appear that he was only with Ianto because Gwen was not available. I am looking forward to reading the second part.

Such a change from your other works I've read. Well done! I look forward to reading the sequel.

Good story!

I just love this story although the end went a bit weird but i felt all the emotions Ianto felt it was so well written.

You've had me crying from the first paragraph. For me that is a sign of a good story. If it can make me feel that deeply for the characters. Thanks for a part two.

I know you wrote this ff last year but i only found it (from a fellow readers fav stories list) but WOW my stomach is still in knots and tears are welling in my eyes, the emotions have hit me hard, you captured Jack's indiference to Ianto then his realisation of his treatment of Ianto perfectly. I"ve read Actions Part Two but wanted to come back to Actions Part one to tell you how you made me feel with your heart wreaching protrail of my two fav characters from TW.
I'm in the midst of reading your other stories and they are just as good, but this one (Actions) has touched my heart in so many ways.
Sorry for rambling but it is sooooo good.

Such a good story! It was so sad and touching at the end. Really loved it!

this was such an awsome read i love how you pointed out Gwen's favourtism and though Ianto leaving is sad i understand it when you read the story

Such a fantastic story! Great last chapter, very moving! I'm off to read part 2 now, can hardly wait! Thank you for this amazing fic!

Each chapter breaks my heart a little bit more.

Very well written, quite angsty. When do we get to the romance part? ;-)

I like it

Oh, such sadness. I cannot wait to see how Jack is gonna try to fix this.

Hey you,

I usually write running commentaries on stories, so here you are, a breakdown chapter by chapter:

1: So Jack is being his usual selfish self (alliteration unintended), making Ianto ask questions hed problably not want to ask but cant avoid Interesting. The job you have described sounds like it would be *perfect* for him, though. I hope hell take it. The incident with Iantos injury made me shudder in sympathetic horror, a part of me hoping that Jack would make an ass of himself. I loved how both Tosh and Owen said that they thought he should take the job. :D

2. Loved the way you wrote Jack in the beginning, but Owen showing up had me a mite confused; I thought it was only Tosh staying over at Iantos?

3. I *adored* this chapter - especially the bit where Owen not rips Jack a new one, but cuts him to pieces very slowly with a dull table knife. Oh, pissed off!Owen is glorious. *wants more* I also loved how he pointed out that Jack claims he cant play favorites but does it all the time with Gwen.

4. This chapter had me in tears. And I loved how Ianto told Jack all those horrible, wonderful things and I wanted to beat Jack into a miserable pulp (or encase his feet in concrete and dump him in the nearest ocean; I expect itll take at least a week before anyone finds him and by then hes died at least five times).

5. I sort of think the aunt thing was overdoing it, but at the same time I liked how that drove home to Jack exacly what an inconsiderate bastard he is. Ending had ne sniffling like a baby, wanting more. You wont keep me waiting for too long, will you?

Oh, and you promised me Gwen bashing in the first chapter and enver gave me any, I must admit that I am slightly disappointed. :(

Hugs,

Adara

Very nice! What was the inscription? Or will I have to wait to find out?