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hufflepuffiesten chapter 1 . 2/10/2019 Great story. My next gen OTP pairing is Lily and Scorpio. |
Random Demigod chapter 1 . 10/10/2013 Oh my gods this is perfection. |
purple-papoose chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 Loved it. LOVED. Why would you be horrible to me and not continue it? Why? Why. |
words-with-dragons chapter 1 . 1/19/2013 This was sooo GOOD! It was perfect! Finally, a perfect, brilliant, funny, in character, not angsty Lily and Scorpius story! I LOVE YOU! ...yeah i'm too emotionally attached to the characters of Harry Potter! I know you said you wouldn't finish this, but I think you should at least try. It doesn't have to be as long as this. Good luck! :D |
LifeonEarth chapter 1 . 7/12/2012 AWWW! This is cute. I love it. |
Countess of Western March chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 I adore this, please UPDATE SOON! One of my favourite quotes was when they compared Scorpius to a fairy, then and feminine elf hahahaha! very funny! good luck! best wishes, CWM |
kandib293 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011 I love it scorpious/lily is my absolutely favorite next generation couple you are a great writer I can't wait to see the next chapter you should definitely write more scorpious/lily stories update soon please |
blueisasome chapter 1 . 8/7/2011 I love this story so much. The only thing is that I thought that the kids were closer in age. Serioulsy this story is awesome and I couldn't stop smiling. |
darkchocol8807 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011 I LOVE IT! it's the cutest thing! Update really soon please! DarkC |
Aurora chapter 1 . 7/29/2011 That was wonderful! I can't wait to read the next part. The only criticism I have is that in the opening you say that no one would have thought they would fall in love, but it seems that should be obvious. That could just be because the reader already knows though. |
secretsinger chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 All I can really say is... OH MY GOD! PLease write at a god like speed I love these characters! they are so cute and I wanna know what happens...In fact you should just write a whole story about them just for me, that would be amazing :D In all seriousness though I love good job. |
aniloracanaid chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 That was just completely delightful. Lily is clever and inadvertantly hilarious, which I find completely endearing. Scorpius makes me smile - I really like that his father and mother allow him so much time with the Potters - with his warmth towards Lily (teasing, and, at times, taunting though it may be) and his strong friendship with Al (who's House I do not believe you've mentioned - I would very much enjoy clarification as I am exceedingly curious). All their moments are rather wonderfully simple (and significant). I've really enjoyed reading about them all. |
PureAwesomeness13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 This is SUCH a cute story! I love them together! I don't really have words to describe it. I loved every scene. The last one was especially funny! Please update reallyreallyreallyreally soon!:DDDD |
bets2010 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 Lily sounds absolutely adorable - I can't wait for the next part~ |
Laura chapter 1 . 6/22/2011 I LOVE THIS STORY! thought you ought to know :) |