Reviews for Laughter & Kisses
charlotte chapter 2 . 1/21/2016
story story story
Operative CG16 chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Story
cutesy77 chapter 2 . 1/26/2012
A Story! And can u add more funny sense? But DON'T make Zammie stuff to much where they ate making out every chapter
zammie rules chapter 2 . 10/13/2011
you should soooo make it a story its sooooooooooo good so far pls pls contumie
The Aussie Rose chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
make it a story! it would be so funny if the school got hold of it and some truth serem(cant spell) :)
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
Make it a story! xDD

I loved the first chapter! xDd
Pieces Of My Heart chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
Defnitely make it a story! 1rst chapter was excellent!
YOLO-TheTruthHurts chapter 2 . 7/7/2011
STORY!STORY!STORY!STORY!STORY!STORY

Sunny d
Paint Your Own Path chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
Story please!
MCR rocker girl chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
Story please
MizzButterflyKizzes chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Now my friends wanted to borrow my account to give you feedback (so these are different people)

just before the end of the speech bubble, there should be a comma. OKAY? :)

and everytime a different person talks, it should be on a new line!grrr!

smaller paragraphs please. what is this!

And instead of ‘their drunk’ it should be ‘they’re drunk’ GOSH!

And you said I had bad spelling!

‘swung slapping Cammie’ THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA THERE!

”Bex questioned curiously” WHERES THE FULL STOP GIRL

hope you liked it REVIEW! There should be a comma before REVIEW!

"It certainly is" WHERES THE FULL STOP!

. bex was there as always fighting WHERES THE CAPITAL FOR BEX!

Hey everyone WHERES THE COMMA AFTER HEY EVERYONE?

EDITING!
MizzButterflyKizzes chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Fantastic* day, Why is this in the French Section? great story, is their supposed to be a 'y' after mace in the second paragraph?

but all in all, faaaabulouss storyy darlingg! however some spelling mistakes.

you go you british bombshell! ;) ;)
LeahAlexa chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Okay, I love this! You HAVE to make it a full story! I want to know what Cammie says while under the gas. And if there is any Zammie.
tempest-holt-1997 chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
ohhh make it a story! :)
FluffyUnicorn chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
Hey British Bombshell :)

I reckon that you should keep going with the story for a couple of chapters. I'm sure Zach and Grant would agree with me :)

Enjoy your holidays!
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