| Reviews for Laughter & Kisses |
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charlotte chapter 2 . 1/21/2016 story story story |
Operative CG16 chapter 2 . 2/23/2013 Story |
cutesy77 chapter 2 . 1/26/2012 A Story! And can u add more funny sense? But DON'T make Zammie stuff to much where they ate making out every chapter |
zammie rules chapter 2 . 10/13/2011 you should soooo make it a story its sooooooooooo good so far pls pls contumie |
The Aussie Rose chapter 2 . 9/11/2011 make it a story! it would be so funny if the school got hold of it and some truth serem(cant spell) :) |
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 2 . 7/24/2011 Make it a story! xDD I loved the first chapter! xDd |
Pieces Of My Heart chapter 2 . 7/12/2011 Defnitely make it a story! 1rst chapter was excellent! |
YOLO-TheTruthHurts chapter 2 . 7/7/2011 STORY!STORY!STORY!STORY!STORY!STORY Sunny d |
Paint Your Own Path chapter 2 . 7/6/2011 Story please! |
MCR rocker girl chapter 2 . 7/6/2011 Story please |
MizzButterflyKizzes chapter 2 . 7/5/2011 Now my friends wanted to borrow my account to give you feedback (so these are different people) just before the end of the speech bubble, there should be a comma. OKAY? :) and everytime a different person talks, it should be on a new line!grrr! smaller paragraphs please. what is this! And instead of ‘their drunk’ it should be ‘they’re drunk’ GOSH! And you said I had bad spelling! ‘swung slapping Cammie’ THERE SHOULD BE A COMMA THERE! ”Bex questioned curiously” WHERES THE FULL STOP GIRL hope you liked it REVIEW! There should be a comma before REVIEW! "It certainly is" WHERES THE FULL STOP! . bex was there as always fighting WHERES THE CAPITAL FOR BEX! Hey everyone WHERES THE COMMA AFTER HEY EVERYONE? EDITING! |
MizzButterflyKizzes chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 Fantastic* day, Why is this in the French Section? great story, is their supposed to be a 'y' after mace in the second paragraph? but all in all, faaaabulouss storyy darlingg! however some spelling mistakes. you go you british bombshell! ;) ;) |
LeahAlexa chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 Okay, I love this! You HAVE to make it a full story! I want to know what Cammie says while under the gas. And if there is any Zammie. |
tempest-holt-1997 chapter 2 . 7/3/2011 ohhh make it a story! :) |
FluffyUnicorn chapter 2 . 7/3/2011 Hey British Bombshell :) I reckon that you should keep going with the story for a couple of chapters. I'm sure Zach and Grant would agree with me :) Enjoy your holidays! |