that was... incredibly hot. I'm still fanning myself. Absolutely love Ludwig's characterization in this

I know you hate Hetalia but please consider making a third story to this amazing sequence of events!

There are not a lot of fics that write sex tastefully and erotically. They usually butcher the allure of sex. I congratulate you on doing such an AMAZING job with Ludwig's fetishes [and mine lol]. Seriously, it is written VERY well!

i might have just had the biggest nosebleed of my life, and that's all that i need to say.
...hopefully...

People who think that 50 Shades of Grey is awesome, should really read more GerIta.

This was even better than the first one.

Ah a sequel to your previous story,is it? How nice of you:-D first off, good use of OCs along with Prussia, Spain, Romano & Japan...esp. Japan. Kiku as usual was very mature & a very faithful friend. (He tried to act as a pacifier between the Germany bros so bad...but failed! The poor dear!) The tiny bit of SpaMano was a nice distraction too. (How I wish you wrote a SpaMano spin-off explaining what transpired between them that made Lovi so angry & Spain so frustrated.)
Feli's characterization was marvellous here, aaaand he wasn't OOC at all...mind you. But my God! Did he really flirt that much with the maidservant? Gosh! All that touching here & there...geez!
Ludwig was sooooo helpless here but he had it coming! How could he treat Feli like that?...ignoring him all those months? But he confessed to him all the same...& my dear you have handled the confession scene quite maturely. Very impressively done I must say. Nice job.
Thank you very much for ds fic, mon cher:-) Thank you.

put in a third one! please?

WIN!

Oh my.

Excuse me; I'm a little flustered.

To start out here, I'd picked up Zweimal ist Dreimal somewhere before, read it, had my mind blown, and bookmarked it for safe-keeping. Now, bored in the middle of the night, I remembered the speech Feliciano gave my poor Germany (that was one hell of a gun, as it happens) and had to read it again.

Your writing style is mind-blowing. I'm so tired of reading fan fiction and feeling so unsatisfied because it's just not descriptive - there's no depth, no conveyance of the characters' feelings. But you, for someone who dislikes Hetalia, have hit the bull's-eye with Italy and Germany's personalities and affections. I could clearly picture everything; I felt Ludwig's worry and his abject terror at losing control over something, his need to fall back on the strong soldier persona he's perceived to be, and Feliciano's - for lack of a better word - fury at being so carelessly abandoned. Excellent.

Apologies for the incredibly long-ass review. I'm just stunned, so lots of big words are to follow.

For once, somebody wrote North Italy as a strong, self-sufficient character instead of an adorable airhead who says "Doitsu" every other sentence. Not that I mind the latter, but it's all Feliciano is ever written as, and to see him as a strong young man with very real, very deep feelings and the courage to stand up to a broad hunk of threatening German sex machine is refreshing, to say the least. You get so many props for that. Feliciano is simply perfect.

And I shouldn't start on Ludwig, but I will. Poor Germany; he got his ass thoroughly handed to him by an incredibly innocent pasta freak. It's awesome, the way you put Ludwig's feelings out there and really immersed the reader in his confusion and want to just balk and run while at the same time showing his desire to demonstrate to Feliciano that he loves him fiercely. Let it never be said that the Bundesrepublik Deutschland backs down from a challenge. Germany's always out of his element with Italy, even in the anime. He's always quiet and embarrassed and shy, but you took it to a deeper level that's definitely more in-depth than most fan fictions I've seen, sans AU fics like Auf Weidersehen, Sweetheart. I can't say any more how much I love the way you threw Ludwig out of his depth and forced him, by way of a wrathful Feliciano, to accept that he can't control everything as much as he'd like.

Oh my God, I can't even speak about the sex. I'm such a ridiculous pervert, but that doesn't mean I won't congratulate you on a shameless profession of love courtesy of Germany. I haven't any words, just as Feliciano said. I was just sitting here, scrolling down whilst staring like a moron, muttering things like "holy balls" to myself. This is certainly a new way to write a sex scene. Fuck other fan fictions; somebody needs to make this into a set of writing guidelines.

In conclusion: Sweet Jesus, man. Moar Hetalia fics, moar.

My only complaint here - and perhaps this is because I haven't yet had the pleasure of reading Einmal ist Keinmal - is that I'm not sure what's happening with Toni and Romano. Gilbert and Kiku's brief cameos also left a little something to be desired, but it's great that Prussia came off differently than his stereotypical "Oh, how awesome I am!" self. Kiku's quiet deference to Feliciano's feelings was very much on-par with who he is; I haven't a lot to say about him. He, in my mind, would've tried to offer some comfort or even give Germany a tongue-lashing, but quiet empathy is certainly Kiku's style. Frau Alke and Dieter were wonderful characters - I love them both; they have so much personality for two servants in Ludwig's house who only have brief mentions. I couldn't help but giggle at the bit where Italy was appraising Frau; it was cute and off-putting in a very good way.

"Once is not enough, but twice, three times" is indeed very apropros, by the way. Thank God I bothered with Rosetta Stone German; I actually teared up when Ludwig said that he couldn't live without Feliciano.

Excellent overall. I hate to say it, but I'm wishing your muse the best of luck with these bets because, holy lord, you write stunning stories.

Excuse me as I remember how to breathe. /bows and backs out

If Einmal ist Keinmal was really good and cute this is indeed your aph masterpiece (for now, obviously.(;) Your Feliciano is really cool, and interesting, your Ludwig too. Really, I love your characterization. The sex scene is f'in erotic. I'm curious about Lovi and Tonio.

I am so impressed by your writing that I am sitting here, speechless. You're bloody awesome! I was just disappointed Gilbert/Prussia got only a cameo...but the GerIta parts..amazing. Brilliantly written.

wow... i wonder what Lovi was doing while he waited...

What? I am still dizzy...

I will bear your children XDDDDDD

Now i have no words for this GAAAH

Very. Very. Very good. I absolutely love everything, and you are soooo friggin' awesome for writing this. I'm near speechless.