Don't know if you come on here anymore and you'll see this review but just wanted to let you know that I have spent the last month reading all of your Moonlight stories and I loved every one of them. Your stories are written so beautifully and you have our beloved characters personalities nailed down to a tee. You cover mystery, sadness and laughter in your stories which keeps us readers coming back for more. Sadly I know there is only two more stories of Moonlight left for me to read but I'm sure I'll be back to give these a re-read again in the future. This last chapter of this store was my favorite, poor Mick having to cut off those beautiful locks of hair but you made me laugh at the girls saying how much he looks like that gorgeous guy from Hawaii Five-O. Oh and the ringtones for the phones, hilarious! Thanks for writing such wonderful stories and keeping Moonlight alive in our hearts.

Don’t know if you will ever see this comment..but on the possible chance you do...I want to thank you as I’m sure I have many times before, for being one of my fave Moonlight fanfic writers ever. It has been over a decade since Moonlight made me the biggest fan girl of Mick and Beth. Lately, my devotion had waned just a little. And then I discovered Lucifer. Wow...I am so hooked again. I guess it made me remember how much I still love Moonlight, and my fave fictional couple. Though Lucifer and Chloe are really close to that status. So here I am again...totally caught up with your ML stories. Nostalgia, I guess.

I have read all your Moonlight series in the last few days. You are an awesome writer and I hope you continue this series. This is exactly how Moonlight should have continued. I can see and hear the characters as you write them and I get so immersed in the stories, I don't want them to stop.

I can not believe that u brought up Alex! In that last chapter. Made me laugh my ass of and i cryed alittle during Josef's talk with lilly... Man.. u must be a bad ass writter to make me cry. It is a once in a blue moon moment when i cry. D

Hey, Im a new reader, and before I tell you what I think of your story, I may explain something. You see? Im from Brazil, so my original language is portuguese, I want to ask you to forgive me any mistake may I committed in this review. English still is hard, Im still learning this language.

Anyway, I loved your story, in fact, I cried when Josef send Lily to the Morgans. I hope you wont forgive your idea of a continuation of this story, maybe Mick and Beth can give up the cure in favor to Lily, I think if she uses, she will can grown up. After all, in the show they told the Coralines blood was even under microscopic examination, normal. So I guess Lily would start to have a growth hormone like any other normal kid of her age. And, it will show how deep, Mick and Beth accept what they are. I think it would be a good use to the cure.

Do you already have any perspective when you will start to write de continuation of this story? Sorry for ask that, I dont want to bother you, it is just... I liked so much your story, I would love to read more of this.

Kisses,

Sandra

I'm absolutely happy with the end of this story ! Even if when Josef said " Once I start , I don't know when I'll be able to stop " , I have to admit I was a mess ! Poor Josef ! But then again, it was the right thing for everybody.

I adore that Mick changed idea about Beth working with him, because I didn't like the fact that he didn't want her around all the time. Now it's more the way I want him to be.

Oh God, I can't believe you cut his hair ! LOL ! But that was funny, and the mention of H5-0 was pretty clever !

As always, I'll be here, waiting for your next one, because I'd never miss Mick and Beth's wedding ! Oh, I'll wait !

i only came to this story at the end havin been away so long. first let me saw u have not lost your touch. i laughed and cried the entire way thru this story. you realli know how to pull on a girls heart strings!

what i also love is that your beth is by far so different from the rest; yes we all cut her as strong and in love with mick but you give her some of the neurosis of real women- u have inspired us to respond passionately before and in this story, her hiding their engagement, made my blood boil...i kinda felt as mick did- she either loved him or she didnt? and she sure had a funni way of showing it! (or mayb it was cause of some of the stuff she said when she was first turned that we havent forgiven her for)

i love love love this story...hope you have already started the next! i am dying to see what you have instore for us with the wedding- if anyone will show the ugly side (ie: bridezilla beth) it will be you!

;3

I love the ending. I like how you conclude the whole story, and everything turn out to be the best for everyone. I also like your reference to Alex *grin* I do really hope that you'll at least have one (or three) more sequels for this. I'm especially looking forward to Mick & Beth's wedding :) I'll be waiting patiently for it.

Lovely ending and I'm glad Carrie and Daryl can give Lily a good home. Josef is better being the uncle. Having a perpetual 4 year-old could try anyone!

Look forward to your next story and hope you don't stop writing for Moonlight. You do the characters so well. I'll check out that book, too!

Great, satisfying ending. Lily's going to be with people who love her and know how to take care of her, Josef and Simone will get used to the idea, and I loved the haircut scene and Mick looking like the new Hawaii 5-0 lead.

Looking forward to the next story, when you can get it out. And I'll look into the book-thanks for the tip!

I really did enjoy this final chapter and the haircut was perfect. I loved how you wove in Alex's new personality of Steve McGarrett into this story and I think both he and Mick are hot. So I think that Beth will learn very quickly to appreciate the new Mick...and hair always grows back. I think that Daryl and Carrie taking Lily was great and I am sure that Beth would have to forgive Mick for something that happened when she was too young to be a part of his life romantically. And if he is not interested in her now...then all is good.

What a wonderful end to the story. I think Josef made the right decision for Lily, and it was touching to see how he struggled with it. I laughed at the Hawaii Five-0 and the Mick/Alex reference. I know he looks hot with the short hair but I so love his curls. And Beth had such class when dealing with the whole Jennifer thing. Glad you have another story in mind. I will wait for you to return! Thanks for writing them.

"That O'Loughlin guy is 15 pounds lighter". LOLOLOL It was wonderful...every chapter. And Trevor's book? When reading it I saw an early Mick, just the way I thought he would have been before Beth. Just a little dark, but still my Mick. You sound like you may stop writing Moonlight. I will be sad because you write them so well. I always look forward to every word, and this chapter was a treat right after getting home from Hawaii and seeing "that O'Loughlin guy" face to face. "sigh"

Perfect! I think Josef did what was better for Lily and he still is her Uncle Josef. I laughed at your reference of Alex, yeah they seem twins LOL.

Thank you for this wonderful story, I hope that you have more than one story to write.

Ah, a satisfying end! Good work, and DO keep writing. The Moonlight universe exists as long as we read and write about it.

An BFangz is off to find Angel of Vengeance. I'd also recommend "The Dresden Files," by Butcher. If you decide to read, DO read in sequence. They are a continuing series.