Thanks you. I love vimes.

I really appreciate this. I enjoyed Doctor Lawn and wished there had been a little bit more detail regarding him at the end of Night Watch so this story is a dream come true. Thank you. :)

this is amazing! Brilliant, brilliant job. I will have trouble remembering that this isn't actually canon. Thank you for sharing it.

Brilliantly done. I enjoyed this story very much. Favorited.

Very well done. Definately captured the feel of Vimes and Lawn.

"Yes. John Keel was a damned good copper, that's all he ever wanted to be. Not anyone's hero. Just a good copper," Vimes said simply, before walking away.

Ohmyfriggingoshyes. Future law enforcement here, if I ever manage to get out of college, and that's the best way I've ever heard it described. Thank you.

I think in this lovely written bit you've got Vimes "I'll do it my way, thanks" attitude down wonderfully.

Really, really well done. A delight to read.

I've always wondered what Dr. Lawn thought when Vimes showed up, now we know.

Loved it!

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Just beautiful. Thank you for filling in this gap for us, and for doing it brilliantly!

Great story. You’ve done a wonderful job with Lawn and Vimes and the way they interact.

I agree - your Vimes writing gave me the same feeling that I get reading the books. This was beautifully crafted.

Thanks!

I think you may possibly be one of the best Vimesy writers on this site...

Very good! I can definitely see this as a "lost chapter". Enjoyed the read :)