Im not a lez but this sure did turn me u make some more soon my pants are wet just thinkin about it!:-)

...Maybe I shouldn't have read this...

The plot is nice but all of the characters feel false and this make your story feel false as well.
You should not try to force a character to act in a way that's not natural for that character.

Meh pretty good but this seems to belong under the M rated group since it's has a little heavy sexual content in it.

What...what is this? Yui and Mugi are a lovey-dovey couple now, and they're not having sex? That's not good at all! Look at Yui, she's calling Azusa by her proper name! The entire universe is falling apart because of this pairing, it looks like. Wait, is this one of those alternate realities that string theory suggest exists due to atoms oscillating or whatever? All the really subtle changes like Tsu-chan lead me astray.

Or maybe this is an alternate universe based on Mugi's dreams and fantasies. That would make a lot more sense given the subject matter of the story here. Once again, in fanfiction, Mugi is left living the dream with beautiful girl friend whose kisses taste like Budweiser. Everyone wants to be Mugi. Everyone.

I'm not sure I like the message this stories sends to children though. It's like saying that booze is a viable option to prompt romance. Is this the kind of thing you want children who read this to think? Fanfiction writers are role models damn it!

Heh, I liked it

I like a lot Mio/Ritsu, and Yui/Tsumugi

Thanks for the fic

To be blunt,I think this MIGHT belong under the M rating...just sayin'

What is this? I don't even...

Okay, yes you HAD TOTALLY, forgot what you were writing about.

*faves anyways*

Well, well, soldier...

HOO-RRAH! 1º review, btches!

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What is this I don't even...?

LOL

LMAO

ROFL

This was pretty damn good if your intention was to write pure CRACK, 'cuz...seriously? I just don't see all...THIS...happenin' on a normal fic. U

Still, N-I-CE work if you were aiming for CRACK. ROFLOL

Semper-Fi! Carry on!