I'll be honest. I don't like this part: "Having collected his wits, Arthur replied scathingly, "You mean, ravished me before you got to? Hah, I can certainly see how that would bother you!"

"What were you doing in the kitchen at this time of night?" Francis asked, not commenting on the observation because it was more or less true."

You practically said Francis would rape Arthur. I don't know what kind of love you were talking about when you said 'keep France love strong'. A true lover of him wouldn't accuse him of something terrible let alone call it true.

This was so lovely x

I laughed when Arthur said that the dog was trying to eat his ankle XDD I didn't except it at all XD

Compare someone to a pig is an insult in French... XD
And I think Lyon was already a big city at this time, but well whatever :D

oooh, this was rec'd to me by a close friend, and i am so excited to read it!
I read the first chapter and I already love everything - am I going to cry in this? I'm not sure, but the summary drew me in and now I'm hooked until the end!
Wish me luck! And thank you for writing this! -hearts-

I'm pretty much a lurker. And not a big Fruk fan. But I really enjoyed this! I'm pretty picky and disregard most stories unless they're pretty well written, and I especially loved your dialogue. Also you have a cool username it make me lol.

I loved it! You've captured England's prickly demeanour, and its soo great to have another Pratchett fan!

Awesome fic.

This. Yes. This was awesome. And I really really really like your writing style. England was so cute, and tsunder-y. And France was... Yes. XD

Who was mean enough to critizise your writing so much that you wouldn't want to post more? o.O

At least I liked this one very much :). I love how you make Francis an even more sexy being than he already is in my head. I am definitely going to absorb the picture of him in his rural estate into my headcanon.

Thanks for this wonderful piece, I had a great time reading this and wish you all the best for your future stories.

First off, I just wanna say- thank you so very much for having posted the first decently-written FrUK fic I have ever seen or read on this website. You are a goddess.

You keep these two so in-character, and- doubly important for a historical fic like this- in-ERA. I love your Francis and Arthur, and I just may have to go through all your stories now!

I'm sorry to hear that a few bad reviews have discouraged you from posting in the near future, but I hope you'll come back at some point with more delicious, amazing stories~!

Once again, thank you for writing.

~Zenna95~

Whoever said you don't write well is obviously super jelly. I think you write wonderfully, and I appreciate the research you put in to this. :) And as a hardcore USUK fan, I really enjoyed this fic. It's very cute. *hearts*

I come back to read this story over, and over, and over again. The banter between Arthur and Francis is simply light hearted and funny, it's so hard not to laugh while reading it. By the way, the little hints all along the way about how Arthur really feels is a very nice touch. Please keep writing!

Oh, and P.S: I died at the Terry Pratchett reference. A Wizard's Staff DOES have a knob on the end!

silly silly france