Would of been more bad ass if Hermione punched Lavender...mean but a real bad ass Hermione moment

This . Is . Perfect .!

This was awesome!

Like it, but you used the word "now" WAY too much. It's a really cute story but a few sentences into it I had a really hard time reading on because the "nows" were getting so annoying. Just get rid of all of the nows (there are none that are needed) and the story will be absolutely awesome :)

haha loved this :) very nice chapter

alright heRmione whoo hoo!

Now this is what shoud have happene in the movie haha ;) I can easily picture this

~Danielle*~ dandin

hehe...GO HERMIONE...best line: Hermione 1, Lavender 0. ;)

Haha loved it! WAY LAVENDER!

Okay so I don't usually review - which is horrid cos I love them. But this was ace biscuits. I adore the way you changed the scene completely and had her taking control. One of the reasons that Hermion was so angry after that Quidditch snog was because he had betrayed her and to see her with the taking charge - nice take.

This coming from someone who is a cannon nut!

Congrats on a well written story and I'll for sure check more of your stuff out... please follow this up with more - from Ron's POV, Harry's and what happened next.

Very cute story and I enjoyed it very much! The only thing I would watch out for, is over using certain words. The word "now" appears at least 25 times, in this short story. Other than that good job and keep up the great work :)!

Haha! Take that Brown! Cute story! (: