Looks interesting, and its really good. Will go and read the actual story.

PS Is that Takato?

pretty well writen fic

It was pretty cool to see how it all started. I'm glad TW asked and you decided to do it. Now I just need to get caught up on the main story...

This was a really cool idea to go back and write what happened before your other story. I am assuming because of the way you left it you plan to continue. So good job and updates asap

MOAR

I'm not sure whether or not I should be happy that my request has already been asked for, or sad that it wasn't me... ah screw it, I'll go crazy and stick with it.

So in general: well written, covers the main points, made me laugh and stare, and of course makes me glad you're still here. I didn't like Sora much here, I know I'm not meant to but still, she was a kind of a... what's the right word?... Bitch?

And of course this now makes me want to reread DW. Balls.

'he'd just play with himself.' Lol! Couldn't you have written 'he'd just play by himself' instead? Lol!

Anyway this slutty/bitchy Sora (the one that kissed Tai, knew about his feelings, mentioned revenge, started acusing him of not going along with her cheating, and using him for her own anger driven revenge) is scary. I don't think I like her, even if she she is pro Taiora. Okay maybe I'm okay with her, but that comment never leaves this, uh, well, it stays between us and TheOmegaMan. Still though mixing things up a little keeps it interesting. Its an interesting concept... we as a group should go deeper into it (don't even think about saying thats a dirty comment).

Anyway the battle went about as I expected it. The whole thing tied into the story nicely. And now you have yourself a whole prequel to explore. You sure do like continuations of stuff huh? Anyway can't wait to read the interactions between him and Jane... not to mention the actual main story.

cool start.

Am I first? I believe I am. Anyway I really enjoyed this. Kari was pretty cynical with her view on Sora, but she's wise beyond her years. It makes perfect sense. Sora was rubbing me the wrong way. I know I've seen part of this background before, but putting it in context. I was really disappointed in Sora.

The fight with Parallelmon was really cool. I really laughed at the first scene though with the master/apprentice comment. Thought of a really bad Star Wars parody cuz of it.