Wow

Awesome interpretation of a little-developed character. The writing is good, and it has a bit of a Neil-Gaiman-feel to it, which is appropriate.

My interpretation is that, at the end, that spark of Idris that held on became a part of the TARDIS? Even if that wasn't what you were trying to say, I think the ending is conclusive enough but still open to interpretation, which is good.

Keep writing, you have great literary skills!

The only thing that really bothered me about "The Doctor's Wife" was how little we knew about Idris pre-TARDIS. For that reason, this was great.

That's really good. I love how you gave Idris backstory.

Great job!