I want more Takano-san's POV!

I always sucker for his POV! Knowing what he thought and feels about the whole situation.

I wish there's more.

i LOVE IT!

Pls write more ️

I loved it! I wish you would continue! Its so good to hear Takano's pov, so sweet!
Thank you for writing this! It was truely amazing!

I love how you connected Takano's decision to let Ritsu go help Mutou as a trust in fate to indicate if he could win his heart. That's an interesting interpretation.

Great story! Indeed there needs to be more manga chapters focusing on Takano. Despite there being so little, you captured what we'd think his point of view would be like very well. Thanks for the read!

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This feels pretty in character, which is super hard to find.

I love it and I hope you will be updating a lot!

This feels pretty in character, which is super hard to find.

I love it and I hope you will be updating a lot!

You have a really great body of work. It's been a while a that a story has really captured my interest due to the author's writing & story telling. Keep it up!

this was a great reading on takanos pov. you did a good job, this was great. (:

I like this! You should continue it soon~

Dude, this story is awesome. :) I mean, we never get to see how takano really really feels so this story would probably give an idea of how masamune's brain worked during that time with onodera. I'm sure when the time comes that this fandom will be filled with various stories and readers, your story would always be remembered... since it's so freakn' awesome! :D

I have to sign in to let you know that I love it soooooo much. Are you a worm inside Takano's heart? It's extermely good when the original manga only focus on Onodera no bai. We need to know more about how Takano feels, and your writing makes him more human instead of a demanding boss and ex-lover.

Can't wait for your update. Good luck.

I. Loved. This.

Wow...with this pitifully low amount of fanfictons for Sekaiichi, and me being used to having fandoms with 25,000 stories, this amazing peice really suprised me. I love Takano so far, (I Just started the series today) and this is really good, considering the few amounts of episodes. Great job! Is this an one-shot?

Not many stories under "Sekai-ichi Hatsukoi" but they will come, and come they have! I'm really glad to have read this story as it makes me realise that we don't really understand what's going through Takano's mind and the way you've written this piece has given us a glimpse. I liked your writing style a lot. It flowed really well and I found myself understanding Takano's perspective better; it gives those scenes in the anime more meaning. There isn't much else to say as you've done a great job writing this piece. I saw the word count and I didn't think it would cover much in such a small amount, but you know what they say: "In less words, there are many". (I don't think anyone really puts it that way, though I know I do!) Anyway, keep writing and drop me a message if you ever need a beta-reader ;)