Reviews for Women
laelruin chapter 1 . 2/18
Tom needs some serious propriety lessons lol.
Perhentian chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
Nice sequel, thank you very much for posting it !
Catherine Morgenstern chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
"She looked at it suspiciously.
'Remember your manners, Hermione. Drink up.'
Hadn't Tom used tea to poison Hepzibah Smith? Hadn't poor Hokey the house elf gotten the blame for it?
Would some poor Hogwarts house elf get the blame for Hermione's death?
No, she decided as she sipped the tea. She was just being paranoid.
Again.
But then this was the future Dark Lord she was dealing with."
I love this entire section. From Mione's well-placed suspicion to the absurdity of serenely enjoying a cuppa with the young Dark Lord and his fittingly condescending manner of speaking to her.

I adore the entire following dialogue regarding his outrage that Hermione's allowed to stay at Hogwarts when he isn't. It's the kind of temper tantrum that I find very reminiscent of his older self's outbursts and yet it's also quite heartbreaking due to the reason behind his desire to stay. Even though he already knows his aspirations of becoming the most notorious dark wizard in history will come true, in that particular moment, he'd still trade places with Hermione just because Hogwarts is the only place that has ever felt like home.

"'You get to stay in the castle,' he said quietly. 'I'm jealous of that.'"
This line makes my heart ache.

"'I can always escort you back to the tower, if you're scared.'"
Hmmmm... I'd let him escort me any time ;)

"[...] there was no way in hell he would be getting through that door.
The thought did not make her feel safer."
Typical Hermione not to let her guard down around him, which of course is very wise. But, oh, how exhilarating to be that close to darling Tom.

Damn you. That kissing scene was utter perfection.

"'Well,' he said, and his tone was quite reasonable. 'I took you to the ball, I danced with you, we kissed ... I've heard to really enjoy the company of women, one has to go quite a lot further than that.'
'Well, one won't be going any further with me!'"
This made me giggle, but also exasperated. It's exactly the kind of bullshit reasoning pathetic excuses of men employ to justify them being pushy and demanding with their dates. And considering he most likely heard all of that from his Knights of Walpurgis, it emphasises what a patriarchal, misogynistic society the (Wizarding) World is, especially during that era.

"'Women.'"
Arse.

Thank you for this fine piece of writing.
Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
Haha. Great story!
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Oh dear, Tom. Great ficlet! Surprised at Hermione not being more concerned about Pringle at the end though
recey2010 chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
hahaha Great !
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
Unbelievably cute how naive he is.
Never a Writer chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahah
Gullb3rg chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
aaahh why haven't you made these short-stories into one long one ? I could die for some more Tomione action :D :D Really funny stories though, wish you could write some more of them :D
too lazycakehat chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
haha this was cute i like this ver of tom
Written Fire chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I just love the house elfs.
And that last line is one of my favorites.
runswithstars chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
I accidentally read Promises before this. But so far I think this is probably my favorite. The fact that they have some kissing going down helps... :D
LovetteLovesTodd chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Ah, HELL naw!
Shubhs chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Tom can't figure them out for the life of him, can he? XD
silver screen icon chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
hahahahaha ohmigosh! i loved this one!

I love the fact that Tom had never kissed anyone, such a new twist but the fact that it totally didnt feel lame.. he pulls it off! love it!

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