This fic has some really great potential, but unfortunately suffers a pacing issue. Events happen to quickly giving readers and characters no time to process the does of information.

A very interesting and seemly well thought out story plot on the Reaper challenge! I would love to see this finished. It also gave me a couple of ideas to rewrite my own story, that I am told was to confusing. I think that everyone should read this.

good hope for more

A nice Story so far, very interessting Choices you have set in Motion. I find it espeacilly intriguing how you include Pottermore-Canon, and if im not mistaken, SuperCarlinBrothers Headcannon as well. Only your portrayl of Skeeter confuses me, i have no Idea where you are heading with her Charakterisation, but i look forward to finding out. Keep up the good Work, and i hope to read a new Chapter soon-ish

Dumbledore continues to meddle. The man doesn't know when to quit.

Seems like female!Draco should get paired with Ron. They sound so alike.

Wonder what Fawkes is planning? I've never seen Fawkes interacting with Fleur before - that's cool.

Good chapter!

Just finished the last chapter and really enjoyed it can't wait to read more

the whole delivery on the premise of this just seems stale. it's like everything is just handed to Harry to succeed and the majority of the scenes are just exposition of things the reader already knows. I'm not really feeling any sort of drama tension or anything. even the initial cold Daphne just seems forced and the bond just waves a wand over them actually emotionally developing and growing closer. this is definitely just a wish fulfillment story with a path lacking any sort of challenge or tension. Ron and Draco are bad guys for bad guy sakes lacking any element of discretion. And Harry just telling everyone hes from the future is super awkward, even having the OC reapers show up just feels lame. if someone took truth serum and told me they were from the future I'd honestly think they were crazy. it's the truth from the insane person's perspective. I'll keep up with it since I dig Haphne but jeez I'm not really expecting much here.

A fun read and a real page-turner (if one can call a fanfiction on the internet a page). I'm excitedly waiting for more in this wonderful world you've created using some of my favorite characters. Keep up the amazing work!

Boy damn I am following this story after I get to the end of what you have
this is great
rock on

Poor Harry. That had to have been quite the shock. I don't like Ron, please let us see him suffer.
rock on

I love this story
rock on

Only negative thing I can say about the story is that for how many years it’s been up, there’s not enough content. Really enjoying your take on the time travel fix it plot, there’s some good creativity being shown and I quite thoroughly enjoyed what I read. Following the story so I can see it when it next updates.

I love this challenge. Yes, I know you didn't use Hermione as the soulmate, but the premise is the same. The reason for the comment is that in most of these stories I almost always just skim the first chapter because they set the premise in the same way and it is boring. Yours was different. Besides, I love the H/D ship. Writing that difference alone will make make this unique and entertaining. I can see that you have been thinking about this premise for awhile. I'm glad you have kicked your muse in the booty and told her the coffee break is over. This story is fun to read. Thanks for doing it.

amazing!

Hermione's attitude is somewhat ruining this thinking she has the right to know everything and shouting at Harry over things that are not her concern. Also arguing with a deity. How anyone could be a fan of hers I don't know.

Not particularly keen on Daphne being a parselmouth just for the sheer hell of it. Having her do a patronus in her 1st lesson is far to fast too.