That was awesome!

this deserves a much favs as reviews.;D

I likey!
I agree: they missed this part out in the episode which was such a shame!

Wonderfully written and portrayed! If would've been nice if the canon had told the aftermath of "Sick Mind" with details such as this. However, that's the only good thing about loose ends, fans can tie them together themselves and can create some incredible results!

Excellent work!

NOT BAD

I likee it :)

Very nice work, great use of imagery and language to illustrate the scene. My one qualm would be the frequent use of ellipsis when Optimus speaks; it's most likely a matter of personal preference, but I'd remove the break between "don't" and "risk" to make the passage flow slightly smoother, as both words are a single syllable and he wouldn't have quite as much trouble pronouncing them. Though, I'm probably being overly-pedantic in my first review, hehe. Great short!

Great short! I wish that there could have been a scene similar to this in the episode. Would you consider writing a short that shows what Optimus', Arcee's, and Bulkhead's reactions were to finding out that Megatron had been in Bumblebee's mind? I would really like to read that! Keep up the great work!

Nice I wish they show this in the episode :)

When it comes to fixing up Autobots, Ratchet's the best. He won't stop until every last Autobot is up and running again.

Wow! A new deleted scene from this wonderful show XD! You must work with the producers of Transformers Prime, my friend w. You could give them ideas for the new episodes, more suspense, more drama, more darkness... All the styles of genders XD.

Excellent work, very lovely, I can't wait to see more of your wonderful stories.w