| Reviews for Falling In |
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  remylebub chapter 23 . 7/14 Really enjoyed this one! Can't wait to read the sequel, I'll be recommending this one to my friend :) |
| remylebub chapter 20 . 7/14 That first kiss was SOOOO romantic and perfectly written ugh the romance of it all! The drama of Frex walking in on them kissing and when he really started digging into Frex for his treatment of Elphaba I was so thrilled! This chapter was fantastic, you wrote that first kiss and Fiyero's admittance of his feelings so well! |
| remylebub chapter 19 . 7/14 Okay when they were dancing together I was 100% thinking of that scene in Anastasia when she and Dmitri dance together. Great chapter, can't wait for them to finally talk through everything! |
| remylebub chapter 14 . 7/14 Every now and then my boyfriend will look over at me as I read your fics and he'll see my eyes all wide and I'll have to be like "well she just got trampled by a horse" or with that other one "someone got shot!" Anyway, I love it- nothing better than some hurt/comfort to really make your audience feel things. I sure am right now. |
| remylebub chapter 11 . 7/14 Me when you mentioned Elphaba cleaning the piano: oh cool there's a piano in their home Me when they prompted elphaba to sing and play something: OH THATS WHY THERE'S A PIANO THERE, I SEE. Loved this chapter, especially the scene of her breaking the plate and Fiyero comforting her. |
| remylebub chapter 9 . 7/14 When the stall exploded oh my god and then when he hit the tree and they had a moment like with the lion cub ahhh. I also related too hard to when Frex came home and yelled for her, saw that coming but man did it make me tense up for her. |
| remylebub chapter 7 . 7/14 Great chapter! I love seeing Fiyero fuming over how Frex is treating her, and her snatching him aside into her room to tell him he can't do that was great! |
| remylebub chapter 3 . 7/13 After Elphaba left their side and when his parents gave him that knowing look, oh my HEART. The romance, I love this so much. |
| remylebub chapter 2 . 7/13 This is so cute oh my god |
| remylebub chapter 1 . 7/13 Ahhhh I'm instantly loving this. The way Fiyero instantly asks to come along, the way his parents immediately know what's up- I love how you wrote that interaction, it was great! Very excited for this one, and I really think you've captured his energy well in this, that mindset of a bored college kid on break. |
 EmonyDeborah chapter 23 . 3/19 OOF I won’t have wifi soon I can’t read the rest until tomorrow! But I loved this one |
| EmonyDeborah chapter 20 . 3/19 Dang that was eloquent I love that he had a whole speech at the drop of a hat |
| EmonyDeborah chapter 19 . 3/19 Ibrahim knows what’s up |
| EmonyDeborah chapter 17 . 3/19 Fiyero being so defensive is giving me life |
| EmonyDeborah chapter 15 . 3/19 “Gee Yero tell me how you really feel.” YES TELL HER YOU DOLT he’s being sensitive and caring though good for him just I’m so ready for them to kiss |
