Fascinating ending! Simply marvelous (I'm sounding like Mephisto as I type this)!

Good job!

So Cool

Such a sad story, but I love it all the same. I have to say, you are a really talented writer! I hope you write more of this!

Holy. Whoa. That first chapter was REALLY good, but then. You just had to ruin it with your crazy-good writing and making it seem all the more real and-

Jeez. But this is good. Really good. Keep up the good work.

Please continue writing

IT SOUNDS SO EVIL! X3 I LOVE IT! YES, ADD A SECOND CHAPTER! MAYBE A SOFTER ONE OR A KILLING ONE!

so rin is crazy? and what was that fur skin thing about? im confuded. anyways i really loved the first two chapters and particularly the idea that Rin couldnt control his body and the hospital scene was very sweet. Good job on the first two chapters.

Omg, this story is really freakin' GOOD! Keep it up!

What on earth happened to Rin? Please continue writing!

Gloomy, yet nice stories. I'm looking forward to the next chapters :)

epic story o3o

like it!

Waaaaah! This has to have a next chapter or at least a sequel! Does Rin stay like that? What has Yukio been doing? Ahh! So many questions!

Oh, are these finished? Because I hope not, I'm REALLY enjoying these short oneshots. They are sort of oneshots, aren't they? They're related to each other but could stand alone too, I'd imagine. Bah I don't care what you say, compared to all the other fics in this fandom, this is a GODSEND! You hear? GODSEND.

I've always got this thing about psychology and so have a lot of people, so anything involving psychology is a big hit! I just LOVE how that in this last fic, you've had Rin being kept like an animal and now he's acting like the animal he's being treated as. I'm so glad I found this :D I hope you continue to write! I just love your way of writing and what you write! x3 Keep at it!

~Blackie