I like your OC. I'm planning on writing a Data/OC fic soon and I'm trying to smarten myself up as much as I can. Good story.

Interesting story, but I have a couple of questions:

1. How could a teenager have already achieved the rank of commander?

2. As human-like as Data's limbs are, why couldn't they have given her a more human-like artificial hand instead of a claw?