wow beautiful story loved it

Please could you carry on with this story. I loved it! I loved every second of the story! Why not adding Olivia and Matty to the story! Like this: Kate and Rick get married, after a few months kate find out she's pregnant - with twinhs. She finds out its a girl and a boy so she decided to call the kids Olivia and Matthew and a couple of years later kate finds out she pregnant with a baby boy. And thanks for a brilliant story!

Something new. Liked it.

One word: AMAZING! Thank you! Greeting from Poland! :)

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this is an amazing story,good job!
i also loved the titles that is the lyrics of When I'm Gone from 3 Doors Down nice music taste babe!xx

This is amazing I read the whole thing today! Was wondering if you ever did write a squeal? I really think you should. You are a wonderful writer!

Wow. That was amazing. I read the whole thing today, I couldn't...well, I'd say I couldn't put it down but it's a virtual book so I virtually couldn't put it down...I guess. Anyway! I love how you spun the story I was trying to figure it out the whole time and it just kept me guessing. It was really fun. I am also in love with your alternate universe/future/coma dream world. It was awesome. (The twins were sooo adorable!) And I like how you ended with Castle telling her he would love her always and the always was in italics so it was like both real Castle and dream Castle were saying it. Great work!
MS

Hey I just fell in love with matty and livvie, and kate with them was just so amazing, you write really well, congrats! I'd love a sequel besides the one from halloween, wich was amazing too. Well, thank you so much for the story!
Love,
L.

I've read this twice now, and I still tear up a little. It reminds me of the JL episode, "For the Man Who Has Everything", especially chapters 1-8.

I generally try to leave something approaching intelligent appreciation when I review, but right now I'm so wrapped up in spastic incoherence, I don't really see that happening.

Love!

Just popping in to review this chapter before I finish the whole story to say that your choice of names is seriously freaking me out LOL I have a cousin named Matthew, a niece named Olivia and my name is Nicole! LOL

great story

Oh I just love this story! Utter brilliance! The way Alexis an Kate interacted was just great and her seeing her mum again brought a tear to my eye! I hope you do decide to do a sequel!

Interesting story