It's definitely taken me a while to get through all of your story, but I must say that I really enjoyed it! Your Dimitri in this one seems a little out of character to me, but maybe that's due to the events that would have led up to him teaching instead of being at St. Vladimir's.
It's amazing to me that you wrote this while you weren't even in high school yet. You're very talented. I've noticed that you haven't written much lately. Are you thinking you might eventually come back? I really hope you do.

I'm sort of impressed (and surprised) by your level of knowledge about sex you put into this chapter, knowing you had said you were in 8th grade when you were writing this during one of your previous chapters. Granted, I was a little bit sheltered growing up and we didn't have the internet at my house yet when I was that age, but this WAAAAYYYY exceeds my understanding of sex at that age. It was very well written.

pls update !

And Christian's sitting back at the hotel? He could have been sitting in the car and come in when Rose forgave Lissa. Then he'd have been there to see the proposal too.

I'm so very very glad that Rose and Lissa made up. I think it was genius how she got there. You did very well. I love the end of this story.

It seriously creeps me out when Rose calls him "Dimka". All I can hear is Tasha saying it...

Oh man, I hate it when Lissa and Rose aren't friends anymore. They were really close growing up and when they were on the run. I always feel like they were meant to be best friends and should be together always. I know that Rose shouldn't have to give up her life to be with Dimitri but I hate when she has to pick between them.

I hate that Mason died, but I always feel badly when he does. I love how you wrote Christian and Rose's story here. I like when they acknowledge they care about each other like siblings. They need to be friends so Lissa is happy.

Just a thought. If Olena is 41, Dimitri is 24, that means she had him when she was 17 when had him...and he has two older sisters. Karo is probably close to 30 and Sonya 27-28. Olena is probably in her 50's.

I'm mad. thats just weird. They are kinda like siblings now. What a turn off

Dude! You can't end it like that lol are you making a sequel to this?! Lol and is it okay if I put this on wattpad I promise to give you full credit!

More lemons

Lemon sex lemon!

Sex scene

Divergent

Bitch