It absolutely floors me every time a read such an excellent fic tucked away as fanfiction. I have literally read hundreds if not a thousand stories. Each time I finish one I fear that is the last really good read I will have for a while as how often can quality work be so often found? But, behold, another amazing author and another gripping fic!

Us fic readers are blessed to have such a talented writer such as yourself sharing your work in a genera not particularly respected, and using the characters we already love and want more of!

Thanks so much for posting this between working on your, hopefully financially benefiting, own original work. Good luck! You are most certainly talented enough!

Part of me really wanted Ziva to be a Valkyrie

I enjoyed the story. You are a good writer. Thank you for sharing.

this was an incredibly good story and im so glad i took the time to click on and read it! Great job, great plot, everyone was in character and i loved it overall! Keep up the good writing!

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I'm sorry. I'm just fangirling. There's like no words that can translate my Supernatural and NCIS obsession.

This was a truly enjoyable read and I am going to proceed directly to the next story...

I have to say I saw Castiel's greed for the souls coming, but I just didn't want to believe it... Also, his cover was blown, why didn't he just grab the necklace with the souls and heal up everyone before jetting off? Was he sticking around to see who came after him? It was one last selfish act; he could have at least used his remaining power to help the humans who just got their asses handed to them on a stick... But no, he used it to hide... Damn him!

I home the NCIS team gets Tim back when this is all done...

I only see one thing wrong with the 'raise-Odin-so-he-can-beat-the-bad-guys- (leviathans I believe) and-save-the-world' plan she has. The Norse believed that at Ragnarok, Odin would lose. Crushing defeat. End of the world. Buh-bye. End of story, everyone dies. Just so you know.

Oh wow for the ending and the extent of the injuries. Yikes!

Is McGee still McGee or is it like Castiel/Jimmy?

Yeah for Dean and Tony's recon mission and for Sam/Ziva's bonding.

Quite an introduction, I like it!

Oh no...poor McGee for the news that Castiel had given him on his health. The angel better heal him!

awsome

ah yes, the fucking souls. right in the feels. thanks, needed reminding of that little betrayal. anyway, EXCELLENT fight scene! great story!

ok, but what threat does odin pose to heaven to warrant the angels taking notice? lucifer took care of him with ease, and while the others arent that powerful, they're still all trained and highly competent soldiers. raphael could certainly take care of him, as i doubt he would want him back if he posed a threat anymore than cas would. just, curious.