dammit i lost! ;)
and thank you for this. i like watching dylan die over and over. maybe me and sister are like long lost twins or something...
mia: who's sister?
chai: and who's dylan?
ally: and why do you like watching someone die over and over?
me: ahhhh! it's the oc's! IN THE NAME OF CHUCK, RUN!
chai: awww, baz, it isn't that bad. you still have all the characters that you kidnapped and raised as your own.
me: true, true. anyway, love this story, and i don't care if that makes me psycho or not.

Why does everyone hate Dylan? I mean, okay, I get you're an unhealthy shipper of Fax, but imagine what he feels.

Imagine being born, knowing you're a clone from someone else and have no purpose but to be someone's perfect other half. (And by the way, he's not programmed to fall in love with her! For all you know, "perfect other half" means a co-leader.) Imagine falling in love with someone who you know will never love you back but you have that tiny little hope inside of you that if you can be what they want at all times that they will love you. Imagine kissing your love, having them lead you on, then watching as they reunite with that one person that you wish you could be. Imagine the utter sadness you would feel, because all you wanted to do was protect that person.

Max made a really bad choice in choosing Fang. I mean seriously, he left her. Twice. She should really have some self-respect. Fang is also downright mean to Dylan.

And seriously, you want to kill Dylan after what he's been through? Reallly?

" and the rods started to crepe closter to my face"

Here is the definition of "crepe"
1) a lightweight fabric of silk, cotton, or other fiber, with a finely crinkled or ridged surface.
2) a usually black band or piece of this material, worn as a token of mourning.
3) a thin, light, delicate pancake.

Your usage of the word "crepe" is not a noun, so, it it wrong.
I suggest using the word "creep."

Am I just really violent if I think this is a wonderful fic?

I normally have no problem with killing dylan stories/ideas. Heck, I have over a 100 ideas of how to kill him. But this one was the most creative and sickest ways for dylan to die EVER. It was the first ways for dylan to die story that gave me the strong urge to vomit.

Ps. Tell Fang I'll attempte to rescue him if agrees to give a kiss and autograph to one of my friends.

Silv

Okay, I'm going to stop now, cause this is just getting too... horror-y for me. Don't get me wrong, I like bashing Dylan, but this is too much. Even Soundwave 0107's Snake-killing addiction is better than this!

Aaron out...

Nice horror story, and I don't say that too often.

Now, I'm a Dylan hater as well, but don't you think the drills were a bit much? I mean seriously! DRILLS in his fucking TEMPLES! THAT HORRIBLE!

Saw!

Sorry I ws so late.

Amirite?

I was in almost everyone and I have idea why XD.

Uh... how about... Coolest name? I know it really has nothing to do with the story but i like the name InvaderVyn XD.

Sorry its short :/ and thanks for the award (virtual bacon for you []),

Random

Hahahahaha I bet fang enjoyed himself ;)

Rawr mean i love you in dinosaur!

Awww, I don't want it to be over! :( It was so much fun murdering Dylan again and again... :)

Why! Why must this wonderful story end? It made me smile! Why! D':

-Wingsthatfly! :D

NOT LATE XD

Wow... XD

More dylan death's!

-sigh- not much to say :/,

~Random

It would be funny if dylan woke up blind and iffy who now has his eyes was shaving his head and leaves to go stare at ella in the shower with his new eyes and Dylan gets depressed and Max comes in and kicks him and then fang laughs at him and then leaves him witha video of fang and max making out and at the end of the bid the puppet tells Dylan that while he was unconscious they had injected him with bomb DNA and if Dylan dosnt hit the button on the other end of the room he will die then Dylan explodes