| Reviews for Hush Little Lawli |
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   CarrotUndASchtick chapter 1 . 5/26/2013 This was great. Well written, and very beautiful. The ending was very well done, and the change in emotion inside BB is amazing. How he goes from this insane killer, tearing L apart, to, what I might call, being like a protective older brother. But, I don't know what I'm saying xD I'm trying to compliment your poem and I don't think I'm doing all that great of a job. I think I'll leave now... *crawls into hole under desk* |
| Null-An-G0n3 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 Wow soooo cool I luv it :) |
| Alexandra Penelope Edwards chapter 1 . 6/12/2012 Nice poem. I love these kind of things where you see things from the killers' POV, especially when that killer is as crazy as BB :) Didn't see the end coming. It was... rather sweet. Are you implying that BB has "feelings" for L, or that he just can't do it for some reason? I'd be interested to know) |
| Blue44653 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012 ok. THIS WAS AWESOME. this is the second best thing i've read on here, next to seven little killers. This is just amazing. |
| pokemaster101 chapter 1 . 2/18/2012 First words: THAT WAS AWESOME! 8DDDDD Keep it up! 8DDDDD |
| KTdidn'tIsweartogod chapter 1 . 1/24/2012 oddly beautiful and awesome best poem ive read yet! |
| AnonymouslyStupid chapter 1 . 1/7/2012 Insanely beautiful... That's all I can say. |
| Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011 Wow, this is really creepy. It fits nicely to the tune of that song. You did a great job showing BB's insanity all the way through, then an even better job when reaching that twist end. It's kind of sweet-in a dark, demented way. Nice work. |
| booksprout chapter 1 . 7/12/2011 hee hee! :) this made me happy... oh, how beautiful madness can be... I can't stop saying how happy I am :D hahaha ANYWHO, the lines went together very well, the psychotic-ness was very... nice ;) I look forward to your future writings :) |
| Lectorem chapter 1 . 6/18/2011 Wow. ._. That was great. |
| Felicia chapter 1 . 6/7/2011 I love it so much! It's so creepy but so... fascinating. |
| Jeshin-The-Almighty chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 *blinks* ... AWESOME! Aw b's crazyness melts my heart. he's just so goddamn intreaging, you captured him well here! lots of Kudos for you! :) |
| NoClueHere chapter 1 . 6/4/2011 Wow... You are scary good! I liked this :). |
| Merci Monsieur chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 Oh my gosh, that was fantastic! Ill admit that I did get lost at a couple spots, but it was easily fixed with simply speaking aloud to find the rythm again. Wow, this was fantastic! Thank you so much! I just got done reading this uber creepy story that I NEVERINAMILLIONFUCKINGYEARS will think of again and you totally just saved my sanity! (lol considering wth you were writing about x3) Bravo! Absolutely bravo! You did an amazing job, and I love the creepy vibe from the fact that this is a rendition of a childrens lullaby x3 Favorite! :) |
| chocolateGoodForTheSoul chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 That was AWESOME! it rhymes so cool with the lullaby. I was actually kind of singing it, and my sister was all like staring at me and was like wtf? |
