Loved it!

This is great!

This is just as awesome thesecond time I read it... Please start the sequel to Lucy soon! And check out my story- the third skywalker.

Brilliant. Brilliant beautiful, perfect. I love how much you say in a sentence, especially in lines like, "By the time her two daughters are born, Padmé isn't happy. But she's certainly surprised." or" This child, this girl who destroyed the Death Star in a single stroke. He never liked it anyway." The last one especially made me smily fondly.

I'm really, really interested in this universe.

This was really cool. I enjoyed how smoothly it worked - that you didn't just switch the genders but hold to the same events, but really thought about what would and would not change.

I think my favorite part was the kiss - the description of them being together in the womb - dark and quiet, with hearts-beating, seemed so real. Really wonderful stuff.

Really good!