You know, it would be really cool see a rewrite of this story with your current writting skills. Im pretty sure you can make something great out of it.

When are you going to update the next chapter it's been a years man

Naruto being beaten down by pre-academy Lighting is a bit disappointing. He is a shinobi. Even as a genin and without jutsus He is far faster and stronger than her.

...I would've fried that bird if that happened to me.

Great chapter. Also are you ever going to update this story?

This is so effing cringy... can barely stand reading his despite liking it. Characters who just act like complete idiots and refuse to put effort in, and constantly try to screw themselves over for no reason. And just finally putting effort in just to still not really put your full effort in. Thats not even naruto. But i get it hes just the way the author made him.
I like everything else though. I just get triggered by all those kind of characters in anime, books or wherever. Even in real life I see that kind of crap and they just piss me off. In their case they are just lazy despite having proven how much better they are at something. And then they ruin their lives pulling a naruto.

Well, that was interesting so Sasuke g0t Hades huh kinda suits the emo, and Naruto and Lighting are a couple but what about him returning home how can he get with her if he knows about returning to his world unless he can change that part

Well, that was quite a surprise I've not played FF13 although I now have the game and will start it soon, so many surprises

Well, this was pretty cool I guess we now know why Naruto and Lightning were uncomfortable around each other still it was interesting plus the teasing of Hope lol.

Well, that was pretty cool, a nice fight a soldier going Psycho and killing others always enjoyable, all finally together minus teh 2 that were captured and Naruto and Lightning kisses twice thanx to Fang's encouragement about damn time, as for Sasuke well Dark attacks her and Naruto uses light how ironic I wonder what that evil laugh was his Summon I'm guessing.

Wonder what happens next.

Well, this was rather amusing Sasuke being jealous of both Naruto and Lightning for having there summons and he hasn't can't wait for there first kiss

Well, this was cool Naruto and Lightning joined up with emo Uchiha and Fang, personally I don't like Hope he's a whining like shit

Well, that was interesting meeting Jiraiya and the Toads huh interesting although the prophecy kinda sux staying there and then returning to Konoha kinda reminds me of Tidus of FFX being separated from Yuna, that's gonna suck but they only mentioned Naruto not Sasuke so does that mean he'll never return home.

Well, that was interesting and full of drama so much drama Naruto almost losing control, meeting his parents almost dying against Arthur didn't even know they were a summon mind u, and Naruto told Lightning everything and got a hug and a kiss on the cheek, sound great can't wait for more

Well, that was pretty cool shame Hope has become another Sasuke, I loved Sasuke getting his ass handed to him, Yes I don't like Sasuke at all but he's pretty cool in this story and he needs someone who can kick ass like Fang, I wonder what Parlos's secret weapon is should be badass, wonder when Naruto gets his own Eidolon.