Really enjoyed your story, the detail and content is brilliant. And very well written aswell.

This is a very detailed and interesting story I really hope you’ll finish it!

I have skimmed the first chapters of your work and while I think you have a unique writing style, the story is somewhat lacking. if you were to portray the characters more accurately, maybe? Don't get me wrong you obviously have a gift for writing...but the story doesn't feel all that plausible. Please take this as constructive criticism and not too harshly.

This really is interesting. I thought, from the length of the early chapters, this was a Drabble. So pleased it's not. Thanks

Interesting. Thank you

Fascinating. Rufus Scringeor was once called a vampire by Luna Lovegood I think. Will they eventually learn o f Edward's rebellious period? I wonder. Thank you

Well done. Thank you

Interesting. Thanks

Thanks for an explanation of your reasoning. Lovely to see the Masen's included in this AU. This drabble-ish story continues to be fascinating. Thank you. FYI fiancé is the male version of fiancée.

Well that explains it. Thanks

Interesting take on dementors. Fudge really has blinded himself to the possibility of defensive strategy in favour of, a presumption on my part, paranoia and self-protection. Curious to see who is found to be responsible for the appearance of Edward and Bella. Good chapter. Thanks

Quite fascinating. Thank you

Interesting. Thank you for writing

A very interesting start. Thanks

Sadly the story doesn't really get going. Its kinda boring :(