You are a fabulous writer. When I'm having trouble finding something new to read your one of a few writers I know I can count on. Your spot on with the characterization and a perfect blend of hurt/comfort. Thank you

What the fuck you made my cry

I love Sam&Dean, and BigBrother!Dean is just the best. Bobby is awesome too.

Some people may say that Sam was overreacting to the part about losing hair but no. It's the lack of control. People live without knowing that any normal aspect of their lives can be taken from them and no matter what, there is nothing they can do and the realization of that is ground shaking and for a teenager to go through that - well.
And also, for those who're used to getting haircuts: cutting off your hair is like losing a part of you. I've had less than five haircuts ever and the last one, which was cut the shortest felt like I was losing a part of myself. Like actually losing something inside.

this is so good u should do a sequel where the boys r grown up and they see john again

Awwww
I want moreee

THIS WAS AWESOME. I really love how Dean was willing to give up everything for his little bro, and that nice touch of fatherly!Bobby cooking lasagna and offering a home. :D I also like your almost uncertain ending(s)... Whether Dean and Sam are coming back or not has sort of been left up to the readers to decide, which is always a nice way to encourage imagination. Great job!

Fantastic story! Had me on my toes the whole way through. And I do love some good Sam whumpage... :)

Bobby making lasagna because he knew the boys would come to him was unexpected and absolutely my favorite thing ever. I love Bobby so much.
Thanks for writing!

That was awesome. Painful. But perfect

I love this story so much! What great insight into the characters. I really like that you had Dean get Sam out but tell John they would be back- that just seems so perfectly in line with Dean's character and it's not something I've seen before. Really well done and enjoyable to read! I hope you are planning some more stories!

What a beautiful bunch of one-shots you have written here (since you weren't exactly planning on an arc lol). I'm really happy I've read them and though I'm sure hundreds of people have already told you how prefect your writing of emotions is and how accurate your descriptions are, I want to tell you something different besides that.

I think this story is a very good example what children go through when there is domestic violence in their environment and your final chapter, with the boys seeking out help with Bobby even though Sam is scared his father will be there and both are afraid of Bobby rejecting them, will maybe allow abused kids to understand that it is okay to seek help. I think you have written something very beautiful and supportive because of that. Good job

And of course your writing is just splendid with barely any mistakes, keep up the good work!

Way to make me cry! Love protective dean. I have an older sister and it's kind the other way around. I woild do anything for her. Protect her etc. pretty sure she'd so the same. Same age difference as the boys too. 4 1/2 yrs.

Cute.

John really should have left them with Bobby Singer. Bobby was such a lore master he could have even helped with the yellow eyed demon.