this put a smile on my face. I love your writing.

Adore it! Xx

I really enjoyed how all the other scenes led up to that last one! I agree that having the last scene present tense feels right.

Just wanted to say, really well written and was a good idea!

Eeeehhhhh yessssss the adorable feeeels!

It is so cute I can't stop this grin showing up on my face. I sit there and smile like a bloody idiot I am, because, really, that would never ever happen in reality (and I live with it perfectly, mind you, because otherwise it would have been too awkward and stupid) but this story is so funny I actually want it to be true. And i rarely want ANY fanfiction to come true, so you're an ultimate winner! :D Cheers :3

LOved it! Very funny and a bit fluffy!

Great story!

I LOVE IT! :)

So cute and funny. I especially like the last one. Lily aksing James out is my headcanon.

I liked what you did with the tenses, very clever! This was really sweet :)

That really cute for a quick read! Thanks for writing. :D

Ok, so this 5th scene was so sad... He was so nervous and his palms were sweating and he wiped them on his trousers, but she said no, without an explanation and he was just left there and decided to give up. Every time I read this, I find it sad... And,I just want to hug him and tell him it will all be all right in the end... Gah, these fics are ruining me!
Also, when he imitated her voice, lol that was funny. Love this story. :)

lovely story, always loving lily and james. They are perfect :)

Hahaha... It's a great story. :)