Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.

Awesome fic really wish it was Still being updated but im pretty sure its abandoned

muito bom

I hope you continue this. It’s really good

it is good i wish you'd continue it

Uhhh, lightning is technically a part of firebending.

Soo, I don't reckon that this fic would be um... Logical?

Don't like, don't read.

Right, following this rule now.

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Please do more chapters!

I hope this story isn't dead, it's really good.

Great story, hope to read more of it. Don't let this or any of your other stories fade out and die

Dayum, and so it begins!~

Love this story!

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Depends on what you mean by rewrite. If the Rewrite is to fix the spelling and grammar issues then yes that should be a given. If it is to rewrite the story and have as something completely different then what you have now, then that is to hard to say yes to. What I would like to see is more length less A/N in the story, less talking to people that reviewed as you can do that through PM's, and less Screen name out type of stuff, Because it just makes you seem lame and a little kid doing that sort of thing. Also this type of note is better left on profile page instead in a story never being replaced.

Got to say good story so far. as for the whole rewrite thing i look at it like this the first few chapters are ment help the writer's find there flow for the story also rewriting might cause you to lose your muse. so work on the story and simply change out the old chapters with the rewrites when you have time if possible. i might not be a writer but seems to me that would be easier. Keep up the good work