It was good but I didn’t like the way you threw h/hr in the direction, where they are not together, you are good, just not a Ron Hermione fan or Harry Ginny fan

I'm sorry, but the whole 'bi people find it difficult being in relationships because they keep thinking about the other gender' stereotype is untrue and exasperating. As a bi person, I can tell you that it is false and damaging.

Wow! What a roller coaster for Harry's life. Great job, thanks for sharing!

Ive veen reading nonstip for the last three days. I am so in lpve with this story so far and can't wait to start on the third part!

my heart oh god that was a rollercoaster... onto the next one! You truly created a masterpiece here. I loved how I noticed (well done) versions of popular hp fanfic tropes such as time travel, sibling, and to a degree Slytherin Harry (although I feel your Harry is just well written throughout he lives up to his more cunning aspects without becoming shady). You just did all of these popular tropes before they became popular and did then better then some of the newer iterations. I find that to be amazing.

While I have not been a responsible reader who reviews, this is the third time I have read Good intentions, and I really love the emotional spectrum you have written in the story. It's hard to not be giddy, or cry with Harry as I went through the book. Thankyou for writing!

gotta say, I love that you have characters called the galbraiths, written years before Jkr started using the moniker.
starting my second read through of this story, I remember very much enjoying it the first time around

This was very creative. great job.

i am sad about this time change

This Harry often does stupid things which I guess the author needs him to do to serve the plot, but that only frustrates the reader. There are too many moments when situations occur that are easily solved but aren't. Dumbledore wanted to help Harry escape. Only out of captivity could Harry accomlish what he wants to do, but instead he opts to stay in Jail? Plus the whole scene in the cave was not credible. Wizards not recognizing wands, Lily wanting to kill to protect Harry etc. The belated explanations don't help. It's also quite unimaginable that any wizards but especially any Weasleys could be Death Eaters. You can't just simply pretend to be a death eater. They have to do things to be believable that no light wizards could do. Snape as a spy is credible, but not several others.

I have never read in any of the hundreds of fanfics of Harry getting the Mark. It was like a bereavement to me. I don't understand how this could be allowed to happen. LV is always trying to kill Harry and yet he tries to avoid capture etc. but here he just doesn't even think about hiding or fighting. He simply thinks it's inevitable and goes along. It feels wrong.

I do like this story, it is well done and an interesting take on things. However Ron's view on Harry's and Hermione's relationship is extremely presumptuous and a bit out of character for him. They haven't been officially together and out in the open all that long so his time frame for observing them was limited and mostly under rather heavy stress. It is rather hard to get a good read on something like that. The point they are at in such a relationship means it could go either way. Especially since Harry does not have the best background for it, nor has he had the time to really think on it. So Ron is fairly out of line with his assumption especially with the obvious ulterior motives. Plus, no matter how well he does on those essays, it doesn't seem very Ron like to have that sort of calm serious conversation concerning emotions. I could see Ron sort of awkwardly asking Harry how he felt about her, I could see him blow up a bit and shout it out, this not so much. While this is the sort of thing a 16 year old would do, it doesn't quite seem like a Ron thing. Except maybe if he is trying to pull something, though even then it would need a little more build up to really be in character.

Seriously this is one of the best Fan Fics I have read so far. The First Part was already good but I loved Time of Good Intentions. The last part of the chapter almost made me cry. I loved the little hints with „Time of the wolf“
Thanks for writing this masterpiece:)

I ship Severus and Lilly so bad! (and Draco and Ginny too!)

I just finished chapter 8 and I can't believe how much I love this. I never read fanfics before this series. I checked it out purely for a laugh. I must also point out I was in a reading slump before I started this. I was so addicted to Psychic serpent it knocked me over. I would stay up reading it all night. I was so sad it was over when I finished it.
I was very sceptical about reading Time of good intentions. I mean how can you beat that first book? I was wrong. Words escape me. I can't stop reading it. I love the world she created here in the alternate world. It's fantastic that she is giving us and harry this world together by showing the memories. Everything is just so fantastic and Jamie is such a fun character. When the inevitable happens and he goes back to the real world I'm gonna miss the world and especially Jamie.
This is honestly way too well written and I mean that in the best way possible. Far too much effort has gone into this.