I loved it. In spite of everything, Loki did the right thing. Reminded me of the second movie. That in spite of his desire for power, etc. There was something he had treasured more.

Definitely made her swoon, after a fifty year distance.

I loved this! It was amazing! I agree, you need to make a sequel where Danica is pregnant!

this was so good! I read it in one go instead of doing my work... I love this Fandral! And Danica is such a great character :) really enjoyed this :)

You should write a sequel were Danica is pregnant... PPPPWWWWWEEEAAASSSEEE!

AWWWW! Danica and Fandral was really sweet!:)

I'm confused

I truly loved this story! All the detail and twists and turns were absolutely perfect. I hope to read more from you soon!

I love it! They are finally reunited! I look forward to more

I love it! I can't wait to hear Thor's plan. Danica and Fandral need to be reunited. I love this story. I look forward to more!

I love this story so far. :) the ending was priceless though, "i am an old man" my ass. You captured Odin very well. Exited to read more!

Great job! I am so glad you updated. I love Fandral, especially as you've portrayed him :)

Great job! I am really enjoying this. Fandral is so sweet. I love him with Danica. Hopefully, this latest development is just another trick of Loki's making. I suspect it is, as otherwise that would be far too cruel to your poor readers. Also, it would kind of kill a rather large chunk of the plot thus far, wouldn't it? I look forward to more!

This feels like a trick...a Loki trick...soooo, if I were to guess...Loki somehow saved/kidnapped Danica, and is pretending to be Fandral, so Danica trusts him...that's my guess at least. Write more soon!

Pretty intense. Can't imagine what the next chapter's going to be like.