Poor Doctor. He has to deal with his wife trying to make him jealous and said wife's protective grandfather. He's definitely got his work cut out for him.

I thought you were talking about when Donna got released from CAL and River died

I thought it meant when Donna was released from the computer and river died...

I thought you were talking about when Donna was released from Cal and River died

Very Awesome!:) Thank you!
It was so awesome I got sucked in and kept forgetting to review. Sorry! Thank you though it was truly amazing:)

I've only read to hapter 5 but I wanted to say this is AMAZING! The plot is brilliant, I love the idea of a pregnant river. Can't wait to read more

OMG the ending. Took me a minute of thinking, but then I realised. River! The Library. Ahh. Omg, read this in one day, your an fantastic writer

Really good I love it it is such a lovely story and wish they made it as tv series . I am a really big fan of doctor who loved every min of it I if she'd it in 1 night

You do know any is Rivers mom not lacy who ever she is

Your story is AMAZING! It is probably the best fanfiction I have ever read. I can't wait to read more from you. Keep writing like this and you will go far.

where's thr rest?

Great story! A mini -fic showing how they get River out of the Library would be amazing!

I'm only on chapter twenty five, but so far it has been wonderful! They're so happy and adorable. Plus, it got TEN TIMES BETTER, if possible, when the Ponds came in! Thank you so much you wonderful person for making this! :D :D :D :D :D :D

"It can't just be a loop." Moffat disagrees.
You know, the thing about River and the Doctor doing it is so natural. It's not like with Rose when everything was sort of in-between, because with them it was romance and flirting from the start, and I love that you captured that.
And "Well…you tell her to push…and then the baby just sort of pops out…" Bless you.

Please let river be all right please let river be all right wow you writer you