great opening. keep it up!

Was it really Rau you just killed off? That's...interesting.

And as far as i know, the "Grimaldi Falcon" is a creation by a guy on this side.

ah! cant wait to see kira and lacus together! lol! this is another fic about kira and lacus which got my interest, thats why please update soon!

This is pretty good. I'm interested to see how this is going to go.

Great story. I hoping that Kira is on the side of Mu since that's how it was in the anime, but since this is your fic you may spice it up your own way ).

Though it is a bit sad, but I hardly see any dark Kira fics that are really worth mentioning.

Hope to see Kira soon with Lacus as the slave and maybe Meer too? (Makes things very interesting if you have a two some that are look alikes, makes things more funny when he tries to figure out who they are and their distinct features D)

damn! another interesting story. cant wait any longer to see kira next time, please update soon

Interesting story so far...weird though how ya sorta portrayed mwu as the 'bad' one...in the anime crueset is also more experienced and powerful and has the edge over mwu. Hope u update soon, hopefully Kira gets introduced soon with laces.. And maybe some asucaga. Great Intro;)