Love the chapter!
My 2 favorite/worst glitches was 1.) I was outside Jeruselem (maybe?) and I was playing around with the horses out front and while on a horse we jumped over a fence.. And sank into the ground! It was like a horse worm thing. Thankfully it fixed itself after a while. 2.) I had just assinated a tough target (I can't remember which one) and he did his little monologue. Well it cuts back to where I'm supposed to run and I'm stuck in one of those fancy bushes. Completely stuck and guards are surrounding me. The guards can still hit me too! But they are so slow at trying to kill me, I just turn off the game and turn it back on. Thinking it will red pawn me hopefully not in a bush and on the run. Nope I'm at the assassin hideout apparently on my way to kill my target again.

Cool

"Mal?" Malik blinked, looking up from his hands as he looked to his lover, who was sprawled out on the bed opposite from himself, hands folded on his stomach his thumbs twirling idly in a lazy circle. "What's going to happen when we get back to Masyaf?"

I see many mistakes in your writing, and things I don't like, but the one that bothers me enough to write a response is the fact that you sometimes give Malik two hands, as you did in the sentence I posted directly from your writing. Also, when you use the word 'to' as the word 'also' or 'and', it is spelled 'too'. For example: "The demon's gaze shot to his victim the instant those insults spluttered from his cracked and bloodied lips. He, TOO, was growing impatient, it seemed." Or, "there is far TOO much jelly on this sandwich."

I do happen to know this story was written quite some time ago, so perhaps you've improved. However, if you haven't, now you can.

00:29 and I can't stop reading O.O this is great! :D I've read your "story of a rafiq" too, They are both very good! :D

O_O OHHHH SHIIIII! MALIK!

This is pretty good!

My goodness you have such a gift :D Most fanfictions have the feel of a story- your's- it feels-felt like a book- meant to be. I don't think I've ever read such a FF so charming and well written- and, I gotta say...

It was waaaaaay more enthralling then The Secret Crusade(don't get me wrong AC/AC:B in a book is cool but making the Alt/Mal fandom dream come true totally out shines what really happened. x'D)

Ah, omj, every chapter- loved it. Thank you so much for such a great fanfiction! :)

i loved this very much :) it was glorious!

i like it as a one shot idea :) they are cute

awwww leonardo so cute :3

cool :)

I knoo what you mean Altair soo much easier than Ezio and his voice actor is so sexier than the first! I finished it in like 6 days XD I knoo Im a complete gamer nerd for stuff like that... and now Im rambling ... but this story was EPIC i knoo I havent commented all the way through but I only just started to read it as I usually only read oneshots but Im glad I made this exception Ill definately be reading more of your stories! XD

So, I just finished reading over all of the story in the pass two days lol! I loved it! I mean, you can tell that you did your research and you put your own spin on things. Your format was amazing! Yeah, sometimes you let the characters get out of character but that was alright. Gives them a bit more humility, i think. I will be looking forward to any more AC fix AND your little mini stories which I had an idea for...DesmondxEzioxAltairxShaun...yes, very weird but that could very well turn into some awesome psychological romance with bunches of action! I love writing out action scenes especially when they get gory...*clears throat* Anyway! Good luck with college and your work! I know how it feels to try and get chapters out but college takes over your life. Oh! I love Maj! Just love him! :D Thank you for being on ! Until the next message! Or story, or chapter...or just next time.3

Man I fucking LOVED every chapter of this 3

LOVED IT lolz 3

I will be keeping an eye on ur future works ;)

I know Ive said this before but LOVED IT cannot say that enough!