I once again throughly enjoyed your work of fiction. Still I can't help myself but give a few critiques 1. You don't explain alot of things you state the way things are and force the burden explanation unto the audience a poor practice that can distract from the story. 2. Your fighting scenes need some work and definitely more detail. I think that's about it besides probably some minor grammar errors, but I can't fault you for that grammar is extremely niggling.

Your truely Ma Vie

P.S. Should you ever happen to read this don't take my criticism too hard I criticize out love and a desire for you to get even better and I understand the struggle of writing stories such as these it's easy to get disheartened. So I will remind you your work is not trash by any means it's quite entertaining but as with everything in this imperfect world it can be improved

Thanks for a sequel i hope the full series is good

You knocked another one out of the park! I'm amazed how in character everyone is despite the romance aspects

Another great story! Still, surprised that Zim and Dib hate each other again,. Not sure how that happened ? And Gaz won't kill a guy that has tried to kill her, her brother, and her boyfriend, but thinks nothing about potentially killing an entire forest full of innocent animals? She really needs to sort out her priorities.

I liked it

I love how zim is so much less stupid but at the same time still the same crazy zim

"Really? Invader Zim? And you called him uncreative."
lolol

I'm really glad I rediscovered these on TVTropes. Should keep me entertained for a while.

I don't think anybody I have physically talked to has enjoyed IZ like I did.
The responses to "Have you seen Invader Zim, I love it!" have either been
"What?",
"It was okay..",
or "Everything is horrible and gross! How can you like that?"
...
Poor ignorant fools... ACKNOWLEDGE THE MIGHT OF ZIM!

(I just now thought, the revolting aspect of the world *might* be from Zim's point of view, if it's not just for simple hilarity.)

Once again I give an opinion on minor things as I have nothing constructive to offer... *sigh*...

I do love the story, but the insane, disgusting, and violent seems to be lacking...
Wasn't Zim evil?
How could Gaz, of all people, be a good influence?
I quite like that this is a pairing whose Word of God (the writer's opinion) is that the thought of these two together makes him physically ill.
Heh.

All of the fights were glorious.

No.
Gaz isn't dead.
Zim is going to kill that boy.
HE BETTER.

Iggins has got to have something serious up his sleeve.
He's got to.
There is something big coming.

That ending was hilarious.
And it also made me curious about Irkens.
DEM ANTENNAS OR WHATNOT.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THAT IS HOW MUCH.

Hm, I wonder who the mystery person is. And I like grandma Afid, she's pretty funny. xD

YAAAY! Misery for Diiib :3
:P trying to find my place :\
Gone through 1 2, time to check 3 :