wow, this is really excellent. you totally captured seymour's character.

Aww this one was so sad. I loved Seymour. He was so dorky he cool. I felt so bad for him. Wonderful fic.

Absolutely wonderful - you manage to capture the feeling of that one scene where he walks to the door she has just slammed and his body language speaks of utter regret, confusion, and sorrow. This sort of wandering with a point inner monologue is exactly what I could picture Seymour having, so kudos with that as well. Overall, fantastic!

This is my favorite movie, and you do it justice. It's a shame that there are not more Ghost World fics on here.

This is really great, and I loved your other fic from Enid's perspective. I feel even worse for Seymour than I did after the film, and that's saying something! XD

This is fantastic. So is your enid centric story. You are a queen.

x

Morty

ah! fabulous. I love it. YOur portrayal of Seymour is PERFECT.

I loved it! I love Seymour. Heh, well, Buscemi in general but we won't go into that. Well written. I think you got inside the character really well, and just as a compairison, I think you did Seymour better than Enid, but then again, I don't like Thora Birch as much as I like Steve Buscemi. All hail the Indie King!

- (A Grayer Shade of) Gray

I swear I thought I reviewed this and your other Ghost World fic. Must've been my imagination. Anyway, they are both great. I wish you'd do one for Becca (or is it Becky?) I'd love to know what you think she thought about Enid and Seymore and the apartment and whatnot. In any case, have you ever written originals?

i loved this offbeat and funny movie, and it seems to me like you've got seymore down pat...good job, very much like the tone of the movie