:) like :)

so nice. you got the characters JUST right, which is difficult for many writters on ff. good job!

Yikes, creepy! And yet... at the same time, exciting and quite awesome! Any chance of you continuing this? Please?

Super creepy, yet kind of cute. Great story! :P

I liked your story!

Ooh, this is so good. Makes me wish you had made it into a multi-chapter fic and continued the story. Checking now to see if you've written more Sherlock stories. :)

I really like this story. It's really good as a oneshot but any chance of you continuing it? I love interactions between John and Jim because they don't happen in canon. Thanks for writing this! :)

Ooooo! *shiver* Moriarty's such a creep! Really well written, just kept it teetering on the edge of danger, loved it!

:D

there's something about this i find mind numbingly sweet, and i'm not sure what. hot too. oh Jim. he makes me happy.~

I like your Moriarty. :) And his text messages. The dialogue and sentence flow is also very nice. A few punctuation/grammatical errors occurred, but not enough to take away interest and distract from the story. I encourage you to write more with these two. They're just so fun.

-Orangeplum

This is fantastic!

I'm personally hoping for a sequel! :)

Whoa! Absolutely amazing! *-* Please tell me you're going to write a sequel!

After reading this fic I'm even more obssessed with the Moriarty/Watson pairing LOL

;) good fic!

wow! simply amazing! i do love it :) moriarty is an awesome character, and you've portrayed him well!

Really loved this story. So something that Moriarty's would do, just to fuck with them