you killed off arthur! this story is so sad it almost made me cry. i love it.

This story was AMAZING! So sad, but yet it was so good :(

Loved the dynamics between the three of them. Fantastic job :)

IYD24

Wow that was an utterly heartbreaking one shot! The small last line was enough for my stomach to just drop... A very well written and emotional one shot; the way you write allows me to vividly picture the scene, the emotions and the tension, making it all the more powerful :-)

Lady Elrayen x

(walks up to computer and clicks mouse…waits… clicks web browser… types in ‘ ’ goes to inception portion of website scrolls down… and sees a INCEPTION story by the best inception writer ever ‘NikkitaIronBalde94’ clicks on story reads so fast… (that eyeballs fell out of head) and screams because it was so AWWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEELLYYY AMAZING!

( Then writes this review)

UMM…

WELL…

How can I say this…

I guess I will just say it…

I am SSSSSOOOOOOO SSSOOOO SOO SO SO SORRY!

For missing and not being the first per son to read this, this AWESOME… AMAZING… SUPERB…INCREDIBLE…ASTOUNDING…ONE SHOT…!

Wait ONE SHOT?

How can this be a ONE SHOT?

This must be a joke!

You are not allowed to end a one shot like that!

That’s… that’s…just…its…just…but...NOOO!

(head hits key board, and starts crying)

Curse you finished story!

Possible future…

Cries more and more until room is filled with water…

Then computer is broken and can no longer review…

I know you don’t want this to happen, do you? NO!

There is no way you want that to happen!

So I expect a new chapter!

And that is final!

This is really good. Next time maybe try an Arthur and ariadne fanfic? Keep up the good work.