Loved the first chapter

Well, not that this is necessarily a bad story, I just don’t think I’m going to continue reading it. I’m very turned off by the fact that Peter is even remotely being considered as a love interest, much less that Harry kisses him. Eek.

Too bad they hadn't said they were staying in the castle. Maybe James would have invited them to Potter Manor to meet Harry's grandparents.

Draco's Birthday is June 5th

The theme of the story is nice. The only problem is that you have changed the personalities of characters too much. For instance, I don't think Severus will ever be afraid of anyone lest Lucius Malfoy and for another I don't think Sirius is such a love sick puppy.

Good job, though. Happy writing.

Good job :):)

enough with the plotting geez

What picture is that?

Awful

egads...cause obviously this is British slang used back in the day.
Allright...I would have assumed your L key was sticking, but seeing as other words with the letter L appear to be...alright...I'll just guess that you honestly don't know how to spell alright.

Nitpicking I know...but, Trelawney could't have been James Divination professor as she was interviewing for the position when she spouted the prophesy. And I believe Lily and Alice Longbottom were both already pregnant at the time with due dates at the end of July. As well as Severus, already a Deatheater overheard the prediction. Draco's birthday is June 5th. Interesting story line. Time travel is often a plot twist to explain the rewrite of fans but this was done in a magically believable way with concerns placed on the changes so far. I know this is an old story and this review probly wont be noticed but thank you for writing. I've enjoyed your story.

this is the best and intresting fanfiction i have read so far

So thay ended up forgettng thier life in the future? Why didnt harry remember, in the first fifteen chapters he was hell bent on getting back?
But anyway, i loved this storybegining to end

I love both ending
Really
You're so amazing , can create this story . . . (sigh) i don't know what to say anymore
It's so incredible awesome

This was a good story. I liked the plot and how the characters grew and changed throughout it. The only problem that I had with the story was that there were numerous spelling and grammar errors.