| Reviews for The Procrustean Bed |
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   SassYNoleS chapter 39 . 9h This story took me on a ride of a thousand different emotions ! Thank you for sharing your words with us .. I enjoyed this from start to finish ! |
| girlygirl0706 chapter 39 . 10/12/2019 Found this story a couple of days ago and I have enjoyed reading it. Loved everything about it. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/24/2019 This is an Edward that was in love with Tanya Denali? The whore from twilight? WTF? |
| shaffie23 chapter 4 . 1/17/2019 Wow.. its kind of weird not to have edward fall for bella right away or at least be really impressed by her good looks.. this is what i am used to so far in the world of twilight fanfiction.. it makes me curious how you are gonna pull it through.. i will just keep on reading and i will be back.. ;) |
| shira-chan 3 chapter 7 . 12/8/2018 I have to admit your Angela annoys the hell out of me, that girl just doesn’t know how to mind her own business. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/24/2018 YOU company is all that's needed. Tanya was in charge WITH the Christmas shopping. ETC ETC, this story needs to be edited! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2018 Why is Bella putting up with this bullshit? She shouldn't have to wait for a man like this. And talk about grammar issues, holy shit batman! This chapter needs some work. Spell check should never be the only editing tool you use! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/24/2018 This story is off to a bad start. First off, any dick that been inside Tanya is not one I want near Bella. Second, if it took Tanya more determination and stubbornness then Edward himself has to "break his wall down" then how is it that he "fell for her instantly"? That's amazingly contradictory. Third, some of the grammar needs work. Fourth, how is it that Tanya left Edward "completely and utterly alone" if he still has a rather large family? Fifth, what does it say about Edwards future love for Bella that Tanya was the most beautiful, passionate, incredible woman that he had ever met? Or that he is able to fall "instantly" in love? Jesus, Bella should be concerned every time Edward leaves the house and sees a woman! He could "instantly" fall in love! And lastly, can someone "appear INTO" your life? Wouldn't they just appear IN your life not INTO? Ahh, that's part of issue #3- grammar. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2018 Is Bella a moron? She said that Edward was a client but that's not really true is it? He was a customer for sure but not a client, he didn't receive professional services. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2018 Pretty sad that one of Tanyas favorite places to be was...…..starbucks. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2018 How did Tanya leave Edward completely and utterly alone? Did she take his whole family with her when she died? No, I think not. You should really reconsider some of your word choices. Because she didn't in fact leave him "completely and utterly alone". What a fucking joke. Could you perhaps make Edward any whinier? All this over one of the Denali whores? Please. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2018 Its a bit contradictory. Edward said that Tanya shattered the walls he had built with a lot of stubbornness and determination but then says that he fell for her instantly. So which is it? Did she break down his walls in an instant or did she have to have determination and stubbornness? Anyway, so Edward gets with Bella POST Tanwhore Denali? Nasty! You can say she was all these things, beautiful, smart, etc, but she will always be a gross whoring cumdumpster to me. |
| sue1zide chapter 35 . 7/6/2018 Bella has as bad a temper as Edward, she's just not physical. |
| sue1zide chapter 9 . 7/5/2018 This Bella strikes me as a gold digger a little. She spouts out comments about his wealth. |
| sue1zide chapter 3 . 7/4/2018 Ages please? |
