plz update

More I neeeeed more of this

Well, I was going to mention how much I wanted to see the next chapter, but then I saw the latest update's date. It always makes me sad when a good story like this one is abandoned.

Drunk Samus is the most adorable Samus.

This is really good. Well written, good plot line, awesome character development it's great.

How is it that I hadn't read this before? Let me tell you, it is marvellous.

This story is just so great, how you treat the characters and the descriptions to let us inside the story, you are a natural writer. I'm really enjoying this, and I hope, with all my soul that you will be able to continue and give us a little more of this piece of you.

Congratulations, with such a great job.

I'll keep my eye on you, even if that takes the time it has to take.

I don't even know what to say...This story is just too good for words and you're ridiculously talented for your age. I really hope you finish this at some point in time because I just found it and I'm hooked.

love this story.

good fic so far i like it keep up the good work cant wait for more thoe i do have to say i think ure making samus a bit to dark and anti social (then again thats far better thant he crap other m gave us)

Hey!

I apologise for the late review. And dor the sake of keeping this review short (which doesn't ever work out), I wouldn't like to state my reasons here.

Well, I'll start by saying that I found this chapter rather fascinating. I don't know if I'm the only one who noticed it but I noticed a change in your style here. Precisely, you've put a lot of effort in detailing the scenery. I could picture everything quite well and even though a few descriptions felt just a tad bit forced, it's still a welcome addition. I hate criticising something I really like or love but I have to be unbiased, right? The only way I know how to get through such an issue is by choosing the right words to describe a place or scenery. Many words have synonyms thus choosing the right one is important. Moreover, a certain detail can be described in a number of ways, therefore it's a good thing to try out all the different, possible ways of describing something. In any case, I didn't have any problems with this aspect of the text.

Anyway, what I really liked most was your development of the characters... as always. Samus is becoming rather endearing and the book idea was a really effective way to develop her, leaving something for both her and Zelda to chat about besides training.

Pizza and coffee... hmm... why am I wincing? Lol. Maybe I should try it, problem is... I don't quite like coffee. Anyway, I could analyse this chapter in-depth but you've already received my praise many times over, so you might just get bored of that.

All in all, you're still headed in the right direction. However, to be honest, this chapter didn't quite blow me away like the first chapters did but it was still quite excellent and like I said... fascinating because of the evolution of your writing style and how it, to me, felt quite unique compared to the others. It was slow but necessary and important.

You've handled character development very well and I think I can safely say you're capable enough to continue on your own (without my advice, help and stuff like that). Besides, I hope you'll also get helpful advice from other people because I wouldn't want to appear to be a very knowledgeable writer when I haven't had enough years of experience to account for it. However, if you've learnt anything from me, I'll certainly be glad, honoured and happy that you have, because I've also learnt quite a bit from you.

I can only tell you to keep improving yourself, and you'll certainly get better with time as I once said. As for your story, I wouldn't want to influence it by stating what I hope to see unfolding, therefore I'll just patiently wait to see how things will turn out without any expectations in mind. I think it will be much better to read that way.

Oh... and thanks a lot for your acknowledgment. I really appreciate it. *Feels special* Hehe. .D If you ever need my help, just let me know. I'm always happy and willing to help.

I guess that's it for my review. I know it sucks compared to the others but I just thought you'd get bored of too much praise. Also, I wouldn't want to give you a hard time with the review response. So yeah, for the first time, I've managed to keep my thoughts and fingers under control. .D

I hope you'll get more passion and inspiration along the way. I look forward to the next chapter, Cry. .)

Thanks for writing.

This chapter, in the easiest way for me to put, was amazing e3e . (Amusing too. Go Zelda, show Samus who's boss and push her in the lake!)

Anyway, a nice start since you haven't update in a while - let's see if I can manage to pull this off and be as awesome as you just were... -

Pizza and coffee, a perfect combination, truly. (Sorry if I'm typing weird... I don't know why..) But really, pizza is awesome, and coffee just completes it.

Sorry that I seem- am distracted. Listening to people play Melee does that... but yes, after a while of you not updating, not updating myself, and slow updates period to the ZeldaxSamus part of our little corner on fanfiction, this chapter was quiet longed for and refreshing. If that makes any sense what-so-ever. But I really want to play Melee... or something.. So I'll talk to you later? .o.

P.S. Hope you had a good Summer!~

Great an update 8D

Sweet chapter, I like how you picture Zelda and Samus in this story, really touching and funny too X3

Update soon 8D

Yay new chapter this one is even better then the last one.

well written

pls more!

HAHAHA! lol i laughed so hard at the first bit...plz update soon. i know this is gonna be the best sxz fic ever