This is a very intriguing beginning. I'm interested in seeing how you proceed and am excited to see a more female centric story. I think both Gwen and Morgana's prespectives need some exploration. I hope to see more soon.

very interesting!

atmospheric... eerie... and a curious take on the whole Gwen/Morgana relationship. I think you exploited Morgana's naivety and her whole way of looking at the world very well, and you really got across Gwen's sweet nature - if it had been Arthur, he'd certainly have lunged at Morgana and tried to strangle her right then and there, but then again, he wouldn't be tending to the man who'd killed his father in the first place!

I enjoyed your description, the way your writing flowed, and just generally your interpretation/understanding of the characters. :)