This is a very good start! I really hope that one day you decide to make it longer

Wow graphic and sic, but I loved it!

This was a really good story! i like how you added in Ferus' balls slapping, that was very realistic! could you read my: LOVE IGNITES THE STARS?

beautifully written, great description and really hot! lol i've always loved this pairing sadly there isn't enough of it and i'm so happy you wrote this, hopefully there will be more :) i do feel sorry for obiwan :p