Reviews for Magician
Nate chapter 4 . 5/3
Shitfic
Joe Lawyer chapter 6 . 2/16
This is one of those "could have been" awesome abandoned stories. This site is littered with them. The funny thing is that I read it once before back in 2013.

Still, it was fun while it lasted. All the pieces and parts were here for some amazing storytelling.
Master of Mankind chapter 7 . 12/16/2019
I guess we'll never know. Another abandoned fic.
flashversespeedster chapter 7 . 11/20/2019
oh my god why didn't you continue this
WhiteElfElder chapter 7 . 11/15/2019
The Red Court just gave Harry and group an open invitation...too bad for the Red Court.
WhiteElfElder chapter 6 . 11/12/2019
Where is the Elder Wand if Harry's original wand was confiscated? Isn't the Elder Wand always on him?
WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 11/12/2019
Harry should have collected the axes from the potato monster as souvenirs, as wells as the armor sword and shield from Abadun.

What the heck is that thing on Harry's wrist, and what is its purpose for being?
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
Is Harry Potter MoD, or is he just a bit powered up because of the Cloak and the Wand?
IamKroGan1 chapter 7 . 9/9/2019
It is an absolute bloody crime that there isn't more to this story. I'm a way for cry...
stylo1 chapter 5 . 8/24/2019
4 bullets took down his wards? pretty bad wards i'd say
stylo1 chapter 4 . 8/24/2019
strands of fire coalescing into a small sparrow, which you then call a fiery swan and then a phoenix.
i can only gues that this was fiendfyre used in a very weird way, but it doesnt change shape you just call it differently.
fuck you can be as confusing as dresden himself
stylo1 chapter 4 . 8/24/2019
his inability to preform magic as he is used to is getting pretty lame, he is already way outclassed in power and now is skill aswell, he has only his unique magic which may or may not work at least the good stuff.
you're also being enoyingly vage about anything and everything, other then that is pretty fun story
George1892 chapter 7 . 6/15/2019
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it.
mckertis chapter 6 . 6/5/2019
This is a fun read, but there is no plot to be found, just a chain of barely related events.
Mister Pretentious chapter 7 . 5/7/2019
I genuinely adore this story. Hope it continues!
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